Spiritual Writing
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Real Feelings!"Things I love to write for and about the Lord
19 total reviews
Comment from Sherman541
I have a hard time to critique your work, rather I find it inspirational and easy to identify with things in my own life. I think you write a great story and I enjoy reading what you write. I so reminds me of things in my own life I often bring up those things. I pray at least once a day, but sometimes several times a day. What it all depends on is my time. Then there is the evening, where I usually have more free time and tend to pray more and more freely. None of us knows, when or if today is our last day on Earth, only God knows. I put my life in his hands and I ask that he keeps my family and friends safe too. - Sarah
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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I have a hard time to critique your work, rather I find it inspirational and easy to identify with things in my own life. I think you write a great story and I enjoy reading what you write. I so reminds me of things in my own life I often bring up those things. I pray at least once a day, but sometimes several times a day. What it all depends on is my time. Then there is the evening, where I usually have more free time and tend to pray more and more freely. None of us knows, when or if today is our last day on Earth, only God knows. I put my life in his hands and I ask that he keeps my family and friends safe too. - Sarah
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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That is so true Sarah! It is all in His mighty, loving hands. I am so thankful that He is God and in charge of my life! love, Teri
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Thanks - I too am thankful - Sarah
Comment from ronnie k
All the time God is good! I reconcile the love and care that He provides, heart warming write, the truth is a easy write and an even better read. This poem gives the praise to the most HIGH, amen.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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All the time God is good! I reconcile the love and care that He provides, heart warming write, the truth is a easy write and an even better read. This poem gives the praise to the most HIGH, amen.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much Ronnie! You know Ronnie if we could just get an small inkling of how truly great HE really is it would blow our minds so much. We would be praying so much more and thanking Him so much more! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Unspoken94
I feel like I'm reading in your diary. This is so touching
and so deeply personal. My one suggestion. You move from
I to we to you in your piece. I have found that I get more reads
and more support when I keep it focused on myself. For example,
Try to form the piece so that it talks only about how you take time
each day. How Christ affects your life. Let the reader feel what you
are feeling and how you have been enriched.
This is a wonderful testimony and your husband is a very blessed man. -Bill
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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I feel like I'm reading in your diary. This is so touching
and so deeply personal. My one suggestion. You move from
I to we to you in your piece. I have found that I get more reads
and more support when I keep it focused on myself. For example,
Try to form the piece so that it talks only about how you take time
each day. How Christ affects your life. Let the reader feel what you
are feeling and how you have been enriched.
This is a wonderful testimony and your husband is a very blessed man. -Bill
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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Thank you Bill! I guess I try to say it to where it is not about me, but Christ loves us all. He will do for others what He does for me. I will keep that in mind! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, God is good, all the time. I wish that I could say the same for myself. Not that I say or do anything so terrible, but most of us could do more, including me. Great job.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Yes, God is good, all the time. I wish that I could say the same for myself. Not that I say or do anything so terrible, but most of us could do more, including me. Great job.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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I totally understand Ric. I think it was Paul that said in the Bible, "I die daily." And that is what we have to do here on earth. There is just so much to know and understand about God's word! Blessings, Teri
Comment from heyjude
Teri, thanks for always sharing about your faith and trust in the Lord.
I know He is number one in your life. It is good to hear you talk
about your love for the Lord. Keep witnessing about Him.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Teri, thanks for always sharing about your faith and trust in the Lord.
I know He is number one in your life. It is good to hear you talk
about your love for the Lord. Keep witnessing about Him.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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I do love Him so much! I appreciate the great review my friend! love, Teri
Comment from MizKat
Hi Teresa,
I love what you wrote and I believe in everything you said as God means a lot to me too. I guess it's the reason I love writing poems to Him and Jesus the best.
You sure said it right in your short line: God is good all the time!
Kat
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Hi Teresa,
I love what you wrote and I believe in everything you said as God means a lot to me too. I guess it's the reason I love writing poems to Him and Jesus the best.
You sure said it right in your short line: God is good all the time!
Kat
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much Kat! God is good all the time! love, Teri
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Yes, He certainly is Good all the time! Kat
Comment from pharp
Teri,
Your words are very inspiring and should touch the hearts of many. It is truly a blessings when God wake us up to see another day. I enjoyed reading every word you penned. Truly God is worthy to be praised and to be given some of our time. If we would received God's Holy Word within our spirit three times a day, just like we take our medicine, then the word of God will bring about a healing to our flesh and He will deliver us from the medication. You are very wise my friend and it clear that you love the Lord as He loves you. Make God continue to bless and keep you in His loving care. Thanks for sharing.......Porta
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Teri,
Your words are very inspiring and should touch the hearts of many. It is truly a blessings when God wake us up to see another day. I enjoyed reading every word you penned. Truly God is worthy to be praised and to be given some of our time. If we would received God's Holy Word within our spirit three times a day, just like we take our medicine, then the word of God will bring about a healing to our flesh and He will deliver us from the medication. You are very wise my friend and it clear that you love the Lord as He loves you. Make God continue to bless and keep you in His loving care. Thanks for sharing.......Porta
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Thank you Portia for the great review! I love what you said about the word of God taking it like we would our medicine three times a day. That is some good stuff my friend! Why don't you write something like that and share if you feel to! love, Teri
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Teri,
I read your wonderful story of how you feel God is REAL. Well, I agree.He has helped me so many times to snap out from my dismay and illness
Gert
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Hello Teri,
I read your wonderful story of how you feel God is REAL. Well, I agree.He has helped me so many times to snap out from my dismay and illness
Gert
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Thank you Gert for the great review! God is so good to us all the time. It is great when we finally do open our eyes and ears to see His truth and hear what He has to say to His children! love, Teri
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You are welcome Teri Yes, I opened my eyes from the darkness and found out it was God I needed to help keep me going
Gert
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend you are blessed to have god in your life and that he does so much to enrich your life each day well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Yes this is well written my friend you are blessed to have god in your life and that he does so much to enrich your life each day well done regards Jill
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much Jill. What is so neat is that God is no respecter of persons. He loves us all the same! love, Teri
Comment from royowen
I certainly understand how you feel. No one can satisfy as much as God, no one can live inside oneself like He can, "there's a friend who sticks closer than a brother" Prverrbs 18:24b, I know how you fell Teri, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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I certainly understand how you feel. No one can satisfy as much as God, no one can live inside oneself like He can, "there's a friend who sticks closer than a brother" Prverrbs 18:24b, I know how you fell Teri, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Thank you Roy! It is the best feeling on earth! Blessings, Teri
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Yes it is Teri,
