Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

We need those bees - they are the nectar of life. Great little haiku with good visual and sound imagery. Good interconnected lines.

~~Teresa~~

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Thanks a lot Teresa. I'm glad you liked it. Good to hear from you. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

You really are into these now, aren't you, Ulla, and doing a brilliant job with them too. Well done on this one, it's perfect and exactly what bees do. Nectar of life, brilliant! Big hugs. Sandra xxxx

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Awwww, Sandra, thanks so very much. I'm overwhelmed of the reception of this haiku. I do enjoy to write them, and I'm intrigued with the form. Another factor is I've been so fortunate to have been to Japan a lot, and I've always been interested with their culture. Never knew anything about haiku before I joined FS, but somehow it makes so much sense to me. Big hugs to you. Ulla xxxx

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I'm so happy you chose bees to write about everything. I'm allergic to them, but that being said they are essential to plant life. Many types of bees are becoming extinct. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Thanks a lot Barbara. So glad you like it. Yes they, the bees are essential to all our survival. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Dustybones

Excellent

Hello, Just stopping by for a quick one. Four? Oh well, learning everyday is part of life. I love the words flitter and buzz which add lots of action to the poem.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Thank you so very much. I'm glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

a cleverly thoughtout haiku, Ulla...
your words have great imagery...

A well presented little poem.

Blessings,
Margaret

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Thanks a lot Margaret, I'm glad you liked it. I'm fascinated with haiku. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written haiku on bees. They are always seem to be busy fluttering around flowers from the garden to be the nest where they gather nectar to make honey.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017

Hi Sandra, thank you so very much. So glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Ulla,

I really like this haiku, but my problem is that I can barely see it. The font color blends in too much with the black (IMO.) Can you make it bold or something? Thanks!

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017

Hi Robyn, thank you so very much. Nobody have mentioned it and I have made the writing bold. I wonder if you've read it just before I did that. Thanks again. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Nice job on the haiku busy bees, flowers, the nectar of life, nicely done. for many years honey was the nectar of life. Thanks for the share and have a great day

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017

Hi William, thank you so very much. I'm so pleased. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from ruzu27

Excellent

I like your Haiku with the "busy - bees - buzz" very much
and the beautiful artwork complements the poem perfectly well.
Well done. Thank you for sharing with us.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

I love how the medley of Fs and Bs and Ls make this SOUND like flittering bees somehow, read aloud! Lovely post with fine presentation. This is a potent tribute to bees, without whom none of life would continue long...

Perfect word economy too! Bravo!

Lots of Love,
rd

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017