Rainy Day
just a poem, mixed meter; a/b/a/b45 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Some days you need just to unwind without guilt and relax and create. It is good for the heart and soul. Chores always get done some way or another.
Joan
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Some days you need just to unwind without guilt and relax and create. It is good for the heart and soul. Chores always get done some way or another.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
Comment from Teri7
I love this poem you have penned. The little cat looks so cute and moves around so much. I enjoyed the wording and the imagery! love, Teri
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I love this poem you have penned. The little cat looks so cute and moves around so much. I enjoyed the wording and the imagery! love, Teri
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
Comment from dmt1967
I like the cat picture and the old style writing but found it a bit hard to read lol. It looked nice and I liked the story of the cat lol. I think that is just what a cat would say. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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I like the cat picture and the old style writing but found it a bit hard to read lol. It looked nice and I liked the story of the cat lol. I think that is just what a cat would say. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it!
Comment from lyenochka
It sounds like a well spent winter's day especially "lending an ear" to a friend. Good new rhyme "streaked and unique!" Love the kitty gif. I hope you had a good and creative weekend!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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It sounds like a well spent winter's day especially "lending an ear" to a friend. Good new rhyme "streaked and unique!" Love the kitty gif. I hope you had a good and creative weekend!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Dear lyenochka, I appreciate your warm words of review and support of my poetry efforts. Thanks!
love,
jeni
Comment from Irish Rain
Ha ha...yes, the next day sees double the work, but how I love a rainy day! The sun came out here today, around noon, and I told my husband, 'it just weighs me down.' Seriously...I'm happiest in the rain....loved this!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Ha ha...yes, the next day sees double the work, but how I love a rainy day! The sun came out here today, around noon, and I told my husband, 'it just weighs me down.' Seriously...I'm happiest in the rain....loved this!! Blessings...
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Thanks, dear Irish Rain! I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. lol "it just weighs me down..." I love the rain for it allows me to be lazy and not feel guilty.
Love,
jeni
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Especially in the summer, when I should be doing yard work!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Not a fan of this font, really had to concentrate to read it. It may be me and my dyslexia though! lol
lazy days are great, but it ploughs more on to the next days!
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Hi there,
Not a fan of this font, really had to concentrate to read it. It may be me and my dyslexia though! lol
lazy days are great, but it ploughs more on to the next days!
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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dear giraffmang, I'm sorry that you had a hard time reading this. I hope you'll have an easier time with my next poem. I know what you mean about lazy days, but I need them sometimes!
Best,
jeni
Comment from Sis Cat
A fine rainy day poem. The only way I can have a day like this is if it rains so much the roads are impassible. Poem reminds me of my Chihuahua, Mina, who gets rainy day fever when it rains and I have to carry her out to do her business. Your poem reflects the aching joy of being home to do whatever you want. I love how you use this rainy day as an opportunity to create and "write new verse." We all wish we could have such days. I love your conclusion, "prepare to spend the next day's attempts redoubled."
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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A fine rainy day poem. The only way I can have a day like this is if it rains so much the roads are impassible. Poem reminds me of my Chihuahua, Mina, who gets rainy day fever when it rains and I have to carry her out to do her business. Your poem reflects the aching joy of being home to do whatever you want. I love how you use this rainy day as an opportunity to create and "write new verse." We all wish we could have such days. I love your conclusion, "prepare to spend the next day's attempts redoubled."
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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Thanks for your kind words of review, Sis Cat/. I appreciate you sharing with me about your Chihuahua. Thanks for your support.
Comment from Lu Saluna
Nothing beats a lazy rainy day. A very nice poem sounds very relaxing. The rhyme and meter are well done and the poem flows so nicely. I like the cat you selected. He reminds me of the cat I had for almost 19 years. He was such a sweetie, I miss him a lot.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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Nothing beats a lazy rainy day. A very nice poem sounds very relaxing. The rhyme and meter are well done and the poem flows so nicely. I like the cat you selected. He reminds me of the cat I had for almost 19 years. He was such a sweetie, I miss him a lot.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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Dear Lu, thank you for the kind words of review. I'm glad you thought it relaxing and that the technical issues were good.
Awww, I'm sorry about your kitty cat. How long have you been without him? I'm certain you miss him very much.
love,
jeni
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I got Chico when he was 6 weeks old and I had to have him put down two years ago this December.
But I have lots of pictures of him. I also have a paw print they made for me in a shadow box with his name etched in the glass. He was a sweetie. Never scratched on purpose, was a cuddler.
Comment from Mastery
First of all....my dear friend....where in the hell did you get that picture? It is soooo Cool. I love it. Your poem is wonderful....great rhymes all the way through and makes me want to start getting artistic too. Bless you, Luna. My favorite moonchild. :) Bob
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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First of all....my dear friend....where in the hell did you get that picture? It is soooo Cool. I love it. Your poem is wonderful....great rhymes all the way through and makes me want to start getting artistic too. Bless you, Luna. My favorite moonchild. :) Bob
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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Awww, Bob, you're the only one so far to call me moonchild and I love it. I got the picture from Photobucket, it's a process to get it into the poem, but getting easier as I go. Of course Dean helped me learn how to do that. I appreciate your very kind words of review and value your friendship.
Best.
jeni
Comment from Janet Foor
A very nice rainy day poem. Just the kind of day to stay in bed or read a book and take care of yourself. I love a rainy day. (sounds like a song) haha
Well done Jeni
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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A very nice rainy day poem. Just the kind of day to stay in bed or read a book and take care of yourself. I love a rainy day. (sounds like a song) haha
Well done Jeni
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Dear Janet, I'm glad you enjoyed this poem and I think that it was a song, except it was " I love a rainy night." I forget who did it, it was a solo artist.
love,
jeni
