You are my strength
My soulmate73 total reviews
Comment from Zue65
It is really a poem from the heart, what one lucky woman, no one has really written a poem about me. Yes, simple words but the words went right through the heart. Good job. Susan
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It is really a poem from the heart, what one lucky woman, no one has really written a poem about me. Yes, simple words but the words went right through the heart. Good job. Susan
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thankyou so much Susan much appreciated Don't feel bad no one has ever written a poem about me either lol
I might write in simple lines..but they are always from the heart
dip
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is well-written and indeed very beautiful and romantic written straight from the heart well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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This is well-written and indeed very beautiful and romantic written straight from the heart well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thankyou so much as always Jill
dip
Comment from Franklin Price
I'm happy, for you and your wife, for this so evident, wonderful relationship of two people who were meant for each other. I could see my wife and me in every word and feeling. Thanks for sharing you feelings.
There were a few places in it that lacked some flow but did not diminish the reason for the poem. I only said this because FanStory encourages helpful comments.
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I'm happy, for you and your wife, for this so evident, wonderful relationship of two people who were meant for each other. I could see my wife and me in every word and feeling. Thanks for sharing you feelings.
There were a few places in it that lacked some flow but did not diminish the reason for the poem. I only said this because FanStory encourages helpful comments.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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I really appreciate your comments Franklin As for the flow i find if you read my humble writes aloud after establishing the initial beat of the poem the flow and meter fall into place ...just a thought
respectfully dip
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful Valentine poem and tribute to your wife and soulmate.
Excellent rhyme and internal rhyme.
Very romantic and a joy to read.
Blessings
Janet
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A beautiful Valentine poem and tribute to your wife and soulmate.
Excellent rhyme and internal rhyme.
Very romantic and a joy to read.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thankyou so much Janet much appreciated
dip
Comment from RGstar
How this warms me to see you up here, Dip. You put out so many poems for the love of writing and seldo get the reward except except from those who recognize your love for writing them.
Love the changes, and such a nice simple message within messages for the moment, for the occasion...as it should be...love clear and simple straight to the heart.
No, this is not a complex write, nor should it be, for it is us that make love so complexed when it should be as easy as you write here.
I would like to give this a six star for the reasons I listed, but alas you have the best I have.
Well done. Nice tribute to wifey.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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How this warms me to see you up here, Dip. You put out so many poems for the love of writing and seldo get the reward except except from those who recognize your love for writing them.
Love the changes, and such a nice simple message within messages for the moment, for the occasion...as it should be...love clear and simple straight to the heart.
No, this is not a complex write, nor should it be, for it is us that make love so complexed when it should be as easy as you write here.
I would like to give this a six star for the reasons I listed, but alas you have the best I have.
Well done. Nice tribute to wifey.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Roy you are such a wonderful, humble guy and beautiful poet. Your encouragement and support is second to none. Yes I just realized my poem is number one on the front page.
I have written over 2700 poems to FanStory and I have NEVER made the front page..never
I am over the moon. It means a lot since I have never been there
Thanks for your suggestions as well I am going to start tweaking all my poems now!! lol
respectfully and sincerely dip
Comment from Dean Kuch
Geesh, you're such an incorrigible romantic, ain't 'cha, Doc, LOL?
I gotta admit, as romance and love poetry goes, this short but sweet heartfelt message really hits ya' where you live.
Well done, Cobber.
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Geesh, you're such an incorrigible romantic, ain't 'cha, Doc, LOL?
I gotta admit, as romance and love poetry goes, this short but sweet heartfelt message really hits ya' where you live.
Well done, Cobber.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much Dean and congratulations on finding your 'rose'
Happiness always..you deserve it
dip
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Thanks, mate.
And you're more than welcome.
~Deano
Comment from Luna
Dear dip,
I liked the rhyming couplets with their message of live to your wife. The presentation was awesome.
the only thing is that my eyes are getting bad and I had a bit of a hard time reading the small font. You may want to consider enlarging it just a bit for others of us who I know have a hard time reading small text.]
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Good job, my friend!
All my best, jeni *smile*
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Dear dip,
I liked the rhyming couplets with their message of live to your wife. The presentation was awesome.
the only thing is that my eyes are getting bad and I had a bit of a hard time reading the small font. You may want to consider enlarging it just a bit for others of us who I know have a hard time reading small text.]
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Good job, my friend!
All my best, jeni *smile*
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thanks Jeni this font and style and size are the same font I have used for 3 and a half years lol I will look at it for you Just got gto get my glasses lol
thanks for the great review Jeni
dip
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I have enlarged it just for you xxlol
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thanks, dip!
Comment from Tracy Locklin
I think this is a wonderful sentiment. The last stanza is the best, so there is a strong finish. The syllable count and meter are a bit uneven, which distracts from the flow at times. Overall the depth of feeling carries the poem, though.
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I think this is a wonderful sentiment. The last stanza is the best, so there is a strong finish. The syllable count and meter are a bit uneven, which distracts from the flow at times. Overall the depth of feeling carries the poem, though.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thankyou for your good review much appreciated I find if my poems are read out aloud the meter falls into place
The flow is fine if you do
thanks again
dip
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my gosh, this is so incredibly sweet!! I'm sure there are men all over the planet who wished they could express their feelings as eloquently as you just did!
I know there are a lot of women who wished they could as well!!
Brilliant job, my friend.
Have a great weekend,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Oh my gosh, this is so incredibly sweet!! I'm sure there are men all over the planet who wished they could express their feelings as eloquently as you just did!
I know there are a lot of women who wished they could as well!!
Brilliant job, my friend.
Have a great weekend,
Rhonda
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thank you so Much Rhonda you have made my night!
dip
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It was a beautiful poem!
Comment from fimarie78
Aw, this is beautiful. It is so lovely when you find your soulmate.
I loved the rhyming couplets, which gave it a nice rhythm and a positive feel.
I liked the use of the word mate, which made it feel much more personal.
Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Aw, this is beautiful. It is so lovely when you find your soulmate.
I loved the rhyming couplets, which gave it a nice rhythm and a positive feel.
I liked the use of the word mate, which made it feel much more personal.
Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thankyou so much Marie that is a wonderful review thank you so much
dip
