You are my strength
My soulmate73 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Dip, This is a very beautiful and romantic poem you have penned. I think this one would be great for Valentines Day. You used great wording and the art work is so pretty too! I think it's neat you have been married for 40 years! Congrats! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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Dip, This is a very beautiful and romantic poem you have penned. I think this one would be great for Valentines Day. You used great wording and the art work is so pretty too! I think it's neat you have been married for 40 years! Congrats! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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Thankyou Teri much appreciated
dip
Comment from c_lucas
A poem is always welcomed. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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A poem is always welcomed. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thankyou c always appreciate your comments
dip
Comment from Caressa_08
Oh, I have 5 yrs more with my hubby here...soon to celebrate this month.....And wonder sometimes where have all the years gone?...So very many.
Really enjoyed the read...with beautiful photo & title to highlight a poem that it being true, makes it even better.
May God Bless you & your wife.
Caressa_08
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Oh, I have 5 yrs more with my hubby here...soon to celebrate this month.....And wonder sometimes where have all the years gone?...So very many.
Really enjoyed the read...with beautiful photo & title to highlight a poem that it being true, makes it even better.
May God Bless you & your wife.
Caressa_08
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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That is so nice of you to say these words Caressa thank you
dip
Comment from Gert sherwood
Nice very nice simple rhyming words expressing you love ,
made your love poem a pleasure to read
Sounds like you have a wonderful wife and life with her
Smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Nice very nice simple rhyming words expressing you love ,
made your love poem a pleasure to read
Sounds like you have a wonderful wife and life with her
Smiles
Gert
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thankyou so much Gert much appreciated
dip
Comment from robyn corum
Dip,
What a delightful poem about love and marriage and sticking together through thick and thin! I really enjoyed it! The only comments I would make are concerning punctuation. If I may...?
You are my strength, your love is true(;)
(t)o any length, you get me through(.)
All those hard times when I am low(,)
(y)ou are my brick, just want you to know(.)
You are the strawberry in my cream(,)
(y)ou are the hopes there in my dream(,)
(y)ou are my lover, you are my friend(,)
(t)here won't be another, till our end(.)
And when I hold you in my arms
(w)e embrace each others charms(.)
I'll never regret the life we've had
(t)hrough all the good times and the sad(.)
We laugh, we love, we've smiled and cried(;)
(t)ogether as one, you're my only bride(,)
(a)nd if you go before I do,
I'll always love, the woman I knew(.)
My mate, my lover, my partner for life(,)
(t)here'll never be another, my beautiful wife(.)
Just my thoughts. Hope this helps! Have a super day!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Dip,
What a delightful poem about love and marriage and sticking together through thick and thin! I really enjoyed it! The only comments I would make are concerning punctuation. If I may...?
You are my strength, your love is true(;)
(t)o any length, you get me through(.)
All those hard times when I am low(,)
(y)ou are my brick, just want you to know(.)
You are the strawberry in my cream(,)
(y)ou are the hopes there in my dream(,)
(y)ou are my lover, you are my friend(,)
(t)here won't be another, till our end(.)
And when I hold you in my arms
(w)e embrace each others charms(.)
I'll never regret the life we've had
(t)hrough all the good times and the sad(.)
We laugh, we love, we've smiled and cried(;)
(t)ogether as one, you're my only bride(,)
(a)nd if you go before I do,
I'll always love, the woman I knew(.)
My mate, my lover, my partner for life(,)
(t)here'll never be another, my beautiful wife(.)
Just my thoughts. Hope this helps! Have a super day!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Robyn thanks for the great review and suggestions The style in which I set out my poetry hasn't changed in 3678 poems lol
It might be poetically incorrect to have capitals at the start of every line and no semi colons or commas or full stops at the end of each line but its how I write and I would have just too many poems to adjust to what is supposed poetically correct.
You are not the first person to pick up on this. Its just a habit of mine and in the scheme of things I really don't think it matters much.
If you read the poem in its content and not those tiny grammatical poetic errors it really matters not in my eyes
Thanks for going to the trouble to graphically show me nonetheless
I really do appreciate your input
respectfully Dip
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Dr Dip,
this is a beautiful Valentine's Day poem. It is a romantic tribute to your wife. You and she are a lovely couple. It sounds like an unconditional love, a rare thing. Well done, my friend.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Hello, Dr Dip,
this is a beautiful Valentine's Day poem. It is a romantic tribute to your wife. You and she are a lovely couple. It sounds like an unconditional love, a rare thing. Well done, my friend.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thankyou Gypsy Your comments always mean a lot
dip
Comment from Bill O'Bier
This would be a great Valentine's Day poem and a great tribute to your lucky wife. (I'm sure she knows that) cheers to you and have a great weekend.
Wishing you the best...
Bill~
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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This would be a great Valentine's Day poem and a great tribute to your lucky wife. (I'm sure she knows that) cheers to you and have a great weekend.
Wishing you the best...
Bill~
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thankyou so much Bill
dip
Comment from Hitcher
I think it would be a very well received Valentines poem and would have your lady/lover/soul mate purring with delight. It is a warm and very romantic offering, well done!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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I think it would be a very well received Valentines poem and would have your lady/lover/soul mate purring with delight. It is a warm and very romantic offering, well done!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thankyou so much Hitcher,glad you liked it
dip
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is a very sweet and touching write with much to recommend it, perfect for Valentines day and heartwarming and tenderly crafted, this is just a lovely read, very well done. kind regards Meia :)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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This is a very sweet and touching write with much to recommend it, perfect for Valentines day and heartwarming and tenderly crafted, this is just a lovely read, very well done. kind regards Meia :)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thankyou so much Meia much appreciated
dip
Comment from ronnie k
Hello, long time no see, I am sure I have some of your early (my reading) so going back I see this is the poet that has to write, I plan to go back in my being and give myself a look at and a sounding broad that is proven to be a tried and true road written in GOLD. Ronnie k
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Hello, long time no see, I am sure I have some of your early (my reading) so going back I see this is the poet that has to write, I plan to go back in my being and give myself a look at and a sounding broad that is proven to be a tried and true road written in GOLD. Ronnie k
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thankyou ronnie much appreciated
dip
