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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "a haiku (tree frog lies low)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
19 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I am still trying to catch up and your photo selection certainly grabbed my attention! I enjoyed your 4-6-3 haiku and your focus on a "sheltered life". Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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I am still trying to catch up and your photo selection certainly grabbed my attention! I enjoyed your 4-6-3 haiku and your focus on a "sheltered life". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 05-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Joan, I feel especial :) I appreciate you took the time to read and review my haiku. :)
Gypsy
Comment from Leineco
oh, the storms they are a brewin'
still the predators hunt and hover
gimme, gimme shelter
. . .oh wait. . .I'm under cover!
LOL - Great haiku - arresting pic :-)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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oh, the storms they are a brewin'
still the predators hunt and hover
gimme, gimme shelter
. . .oh wait. . .I'm under cover!
LOL - Great haiku - arresting pic :-)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you, sweetie pie, I appreciate it your excellent review.
Gypsy
I like your poem reviews... :)
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
What a charming Haiku, frogs certainly have been the preferred choice for challenge 7. Your little frog and words go together so well Cheers Gaye
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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What a charming Haiku, frogs certainly have been the preferred choice for challenge 7. Your little frog and words go together so well Cheers Gaye
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Gaye,
Gypsy Sensei
Buddha Blessings
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, this is soooo sweet...I love this picture...but I think frogs are cute...what can I say...LOL...at least they have each other...very cute sweet girl...and I love your poem...Love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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HI Gypsy, this is soooo sweet...I love this picture...but I think frogs are cute...what can I say...LOL...at least they have each other...very cute sweet girl...and I love your poem...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank you, sweetie pie, how are you doing? I really appreciate that you read and review this poem. :) You are very kind.
Gypsy
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you are so welcome Gypsy...smiling back at ya you...your pretty kind yourself...love xxoo
Comment from judiverse
I don't know about all these critters. A lovely presentation. It seems that every animal has a means to keep itself out of harm's way. It looks like the tree frog in the picture is blending right in. Sheltered life makes an excellent satori line. The site has so many "extra activities" going on right now. I feel like I don't have time for these additional tasks. judi
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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I don't know about all these critters. A lovely presentation. It seems that every animal has a means to keep itself out of harm's way. It looks like the tree frog in the picture is blending right in. Sheltered life makes an excellent satori line. The site has so many "extra activities" going on right now. I feel like I don't have time for these additional tasks. judi
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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thank you, judi,
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You're very welcome. Much success with your class. judi
Comment from Sasha
Excellent haiku. This one reminded me of the frogs outside my window croaking every night. I especially like this one and just love the illustration. What a cute little guy he is. This is well written, perfect connection of first two line and terrific satori. I enjoyed this one very much.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Excellent haiku. This one reminded me of the frogs outside my window croaking every night. I especially like this one and just love the illustration. What a cute little guy he is. This is well written, perfect connection of first two line and terrific satori. I enjoyed this one very much.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Sasha,
Comment from winnona
A very well-written challenge for the haiku clubs book. I love frogs and could picture the little tree frog safe in the canopy of leaves, singing his little heart out.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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A very well-written challenge for the haiku clubs book. I love frogs and could picture the little tree frog safe in the canopy of leaves, singing his little heart out.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Winnona,
Comment from Grasshopper2
Beautiful visual where all colors support each other. Your haiku is spot on with following rules. The tree frog's voice is in tenor to countertenor in pitch. It sounds like they say a word. Think the word tramp spoken drawn out in a long high pitch song. Well done.
Grasshopper
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Beautiful visual where all colors support each other. Your haiku is spot on with following rules. The tree frog's voice is in tenor to countertenor in pitch. It sounds like they say a word. Think the word tramp spoken drawn out in a long high pitch song. Well done.
Grasshopper
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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hahaha.... thank you, young grasshopper
Comment from krys123
Hello Gypsy;
-I really love the humor in this cycle and the pictures just a gas with their frog peeking through those large leaves. It's so cute.
-Very to grammatically connected lines that are very descriptive and expressive in nature and in imagery.
-The third line are satori offers an aha moment to the Haiku and especially summarizes the relativity of the conceptual theme.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Hello Gypsy;
-I really love the humor in this cycle and the pictures just a gas with their frog peeking through those large leaves. It's so cute.
-Very to grammatically connected lines that are very descriptive and expressive in nature and in imagery.
-The third line are satori offers an aha moment to the Haiku and especially summarizes the relativity of the conceptual theme.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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thank you, alex
Comment from Luna
Sister, I loved your haiku. Your word choice is outstanding and the presentation perfect.
I'm slowly working up the nerve to participate in the club.
love,
Sister Luna
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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Sister, I loved your haiku. Your word choice is outstanding and the presentation perfect.
I'm slowly working up the nerve to participate in the club.
love,
Sister Luna
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017
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okay, sister luna, will be there for you when you come <3 thank you, sweetie pie
