Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi friend. What a lovely and tender writing , and yet so full of imaginative images . The winter sounds convincing and less unfriendly. Take good care of Mrs Winter.
Danny Jock

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.

Comment from estory

Excellent

I think you did a great job within the rules. You created a great sense of personality with the conversational tone, really a monologue. You make it a little complicated in leaving Mrs. Winter behind. she doesn't like the cold, she waits for spring. And winter seems to have some compassion, even though he loves the snowmen, the ice, he lets spring come for her. Nice job estory

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

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Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest very well. Your words flowed line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Thanks for your kind review, anon. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Aww, Mr. Winter sounds like a gentleman! At least he has the courtesy to leave Mrs. Winter to the warmth until spring. AND..she gets a ring! Cute entry for this contest, good luck, Blessings..

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Thanks for your kind review, anon. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice and interesting poem you have penned for the writing prompt
Personification of Winter. You used very good descriptive wording and I love the art work you chose for it! Best wishes in the contest! Teri

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017

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Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Well, Mr. Winter, you can fade into spring anytime now. I'm tired of being cold all the time. Nice job of personification. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017

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Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine personification of winter
for the contest
A free poem with a couple of rhymes
about the good side of Mr. Winter
Excellent art work to match
Good luck in the contest
You might want to capitalize Mister in the title

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Thanks for the tip

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely as you certainly personify winter in the first person throughout. You cover all that winter is as you tell your story. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017

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Comment from Sixty70

Excellent

Ah Mister Winter, bringing snow "every now and then". Not here, though, and the Midwest usually gets a lot of snow. Love that Mrs. Winter is more about spring than about winter itself - sort of like Persephone and Hades.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017

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Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Really enjoyed this, free verse is my favourite kind of poetry and you have done it proud.
You have saved the best to last with Mrs Winter...very clever.

Thanks for sharing

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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017

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