My Haikus
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Feeling Froggy?"Collection of haikus
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
LOL awesome haiku, Darren. You did well with the challenge. I like your choice of words and the form of your haiku is good.
Take care, my friend,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
LOL awesome haiku, Darren. You did well with the challenge. I like your choice of words and the form of your haiku is good.
Take care, my friend,
Gypsy
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks so much,
Blue Blessings,
Brother Badger
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Thank you, Darren, take care,
Gypsy
Comment from winnona
well written haiku challenge poem. The words flowed well combined easily and gave the sense of the frog talking to the tadpole well. I like all the different amphibians and find each species fascinating.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
well written haiku challenge poem. The words flowed well combined easily and gave the sense of the frog talking to the tadpole well. I like all the different amphibians and find each species fascinating.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thanks so much for your continued support.
Darren
Comment from azwildrosa
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lol how cute that last line! Makes me laugh at your play on word. I love frogs. I think I just love reptiles. As a kid I use to go frog hunting in the ditches with my brothers. I use to be so amazed when I saw a tadpoles with legs. This is a great haiku taking me back to my childhood. Perfect images, and thought. Thank you for sharing!!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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lol how cute that last line! Makes me laugh at your play on word. I love frogs. I think I just love reptiles. As a kid I use to go frog hunting in the ditches with my brothers. I use to be so amazed when I saw a tadpoles with legs. This is a great haiku taking me back to my childhood. Perfect images, and thought. Thank you for sharing!!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review
I really appreciate your comments
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from marybell1
Loved your haiku, and because I grew up playing with frogs and tadpoles I thought you deserves a top mark. Cheers.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
Loved your haiku, and because I grew up playing with frogs and tadpoles I thought you deserves a top mark. Cheers.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate your comments, and helping me remember too . . .
Blessings,
Brother Badger. : - D »~