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Collection of haikus

4 total reviews 
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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LOL awesome haiku, Darren. You did well with the challenge. I like your choice of words and the form of your haiku is good.

Take care, my friend,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
    Thanks so much,
    Blue Blessings,
    Brother Badger
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 29-Jan-2017
    Thank you, Darren, take care,

    Gypsy
Comment from winnona
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well written haiku challenge poem. The words flowed well combined easily and gave the sense of the frog talking to the tadpole well. I like all the different amphibians and find each species fascinating.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
    Thanks so much for your continued support.
    Darren
Comment from azwildrosa
Exceptional
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lol how cute that last line! Makes me laugh at your play on word. I love frogs. I think I just love reptiles. As a kid I use to go frog hunting in the ditches with my brothers. I use to be so amazed when I saw a tadpoles with legs. This is a great haiku taking me back to my childhood. Perfect images, and thought. Thank you for sharing!!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review
    I really appreciate your comments
    Blessings,
    Brother Badger
Comment from marybell1
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Loved your haiku, and because I grew up playing with frogs and tadpoles I thought you deserves a top mark. Cheers.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate your comments, and helping me remember too . . .
    Blessings,
    Brother Badger.