Spiritual Writing
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Holy Spirit Guidance"Things I love to write for and about the Lord
27 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We all need it from time to time and your poem says it all, I wish you luck with the competition, good write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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We all need it from time to time and your poem says it all, I wish you luck with the competition, good write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment from heyjude
Teri, a very nice three line poem with reflections of the Spirit living within us and guiding us. We want the Spirit to comfort and guide us
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Teri, a very nice three line poem with reflections of the Spirit living within us and guiding us. We want the Spirit to comfort and guide us
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you my friend. I am happy that He does abide in us! love, Teri
Comment from Lu Saluna
A very well written spiritual poem for the 3-line poetry contest. It reads like a short pray or mantra. You selected a very nice piece of artwork to go with it.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Lu
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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A very well written spiritual poem for the 3-line poetry contest. It reads like a short pray or mantra. You selected a very nice piece of artwork to go with it.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Lu
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much my friend. Blessings, Teri
Comment from closetpoetjester
Your poem tells of his presence with you always and it's evident you have such a strong bond with The Almighty Lord.
Nicely done. It encompasses your faith as a whole and the fact you want to hold on to it forever more!
Well done
Cheers P
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Your poem tells of his presence with you always and it's evident you have such a strong bond with The Almighty Lord.
Nicely done. It encompasses your faith as a whole and the fact you want to hold on to it forever more!
Well done
Cheers P
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for the great review! I am so thankful that He brought me out of a bad situation to serving Him and loving Him daily! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Stacia Ann
Hi, Teri! Thanks for submitting this. Very nice work.
The image itself is so evocative--the stillness and peace of the figure, who could be a practitioner of almost any spirituality; there is a universality there.
You also express clearly in three lines the idea of having a spirit in you, or near you, and its comfort, using a spare form that goes with the image. The use of "Holy Spirit" also seems universal, again connecting to the figure.
It all works together well!
Thank you for sharing:)
Stacia
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Hi, Teri! Thanks for submitting this. Very nice work.
The image itself is so evocative--the stillness and peace of the figure, who could be a practitioner of almost any spirituality; there is a universality there.
You also express clearly in three lines the idea of having a spirit in you, or near you, and its comfort, using a spare form that goes with the image. The use of "Holy Spirit" also seems universal, again connecting to the figure.
It all works together well!
Thank you for sharing:)
Stacia
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the great review. I am very thankful for the Holy Spirit of God! It makes a big difference in my life every day! Blessings, Teri
Comment from AnnaLinda
Teri,
It's so challenging to make a strong statement with
so few syllables. You have accomplished sharing the
song of your heart and soul and spirit in this entry.
Congratulations,
Linda
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Teri,
It's so challenging to make a strong statement with
so few syllables. You have accomplished sharing the
song of your heart and soul and spirit in this entry.
Congratulations,
Linda
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Irish Rain
Yes, if we still our minds, we can hear the Spirit, guiding our minutes, days and hours. We always know which direction to go in. This is a lovely 3-line poem entry, blessings...
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Yes, if we still our minds, we can hear the Spirit, guiding our minutes, days and hours. We always know which direction to go in. This is a lovely 3-line poem entry, blessings...
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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So very true! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smile Teri
How nice of you to express yourself from just three lines of how the Holy Spirit is your guide to what ever you do throughout your life
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Smile Teri
How nice of you to express yourself from just three lines of how the Holy Spirit is your guide to what ever you do throughout your life
Gert
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much Gert! Blessings, Teri
Comment from patcelaw
Teri, very nicely done for the three line poetry contest. Good luck in the contest. Many blessings for a wonderful and joyful weekend my friend. Patricia
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Teri, very nicely done for the three line poetry contest. Good luck in the contest. Many blessings for a wonderful and joyful weekend my friend. Patricia
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you my friend and I wish you the same! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is a very beautiful three line poem expressing your happiness and faith with beautiful art work I enjoyed well done my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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This is a very beautiful three line poem expressing your happiness and faith with beautiful art work I enjoyed well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much my friend! Blessings, Teri
