Tin Cup
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Dark Days"An American Civil War vet heads west.
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Comment from Moon baby
You did an outstanding job with this. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and followed along with ease because you write and narrate so well. You made the characters come to life and my imagination left to picture what was going on. Really great work!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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You did an outstanding job with this. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and followed along with ease because you write and narrate so well. You made the characters come to life and my imagination left to picture what was going on. Really great work!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind and generous review. I appreciate your comments and the feedback. I find your remarks very encouraging.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Historic reflection of theoretical implication in war; the story ends; hard colonial days living, structured plot is well maintained in good flow of thoughts, thematic percolation is good with fast forward plot progression, I enjoyed the read, appropriate and live dialogues.
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Historic reflection of theoretical implication in war; the story ends; hard colonial days living, structured plot is well maintained in good flow of thoughts, thematic percolation is good with fast forward plot progression, I enjoyed the read, appropriate and live dialogues.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter. I haven't updated this story for a while so I wasn't sure how much back story to show. This is actually about a Civil War veteran, but I appreciate your time and comments.
