Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Change"a place to gather my poetic forms
35 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A beautiful reflection of your own personal journey though transformation.
I like the way you experiment with different poetic forms. It seems to be a challenge to you to excel in each.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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A beautiful reflection of your own personal journey though transformation.
I like the way you experiment with different poetic forms. It seems to be a challenge to you to excel in each.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Rhonda. Yes, I like to experiment with different forms, to me it's like putting together a puzzle. I appreciate your kind words of review.
Best,
jeni
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Change is the law of life. And those who look only to the past or present are certain to miss the future. To improve is to change; to be perfect is to change often. Thanks for another great piece.
Wishing you the best.
Bill~
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Change is the law of life. And those who look only to the past or present are certain to miss the future. To improve is to change; to be perfect is to change often. Thanks for another great piece.
Wishing you the best.
Bill~
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thank you, bill, for your insightful review of my poem. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Have a great Sunday!
Best,
Luna
Comment from William Ross
Nice a new style for me, I have never seen this before,seems sort of easy enough, you did a great job on this one.thanks for the share and have a great day
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Nice a new style for me, I have never seen this before,seems sort of easy enough, you did a great job on this one.thanks for the share and have a great day
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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It actually isn't all that easy, but not extremely difficult. I'm happy you thought I did a good job on this one. Thanks for your kind words of review.
Best,
jeni
Comment from mermaids
Emerge from the cocoon, is a great line. It shows change and transition, just like the butterfly emerging from the cocoon. You did an excellent job with this form which is not easy. I love shape poems but they are quite the challenge to create.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Emerge from the cocoon, is a great line. It shows change and transition, just like the butterfly emerging from the cocoon. You did an excellent job with this form which is not easy. I love shape poems but they are quite the challenge to create.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thank you, mermaids, I'm happy that you thought I got the form right. Thanks for the kind words of review.
Best,
jeni
Comment from gene roush
Nice job of using a very constrictive art form to get your message out.
Some of the exercises you poets contrive would exhaust me.
This is very uplifting. thanks for sharing
Gene
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Nice job of using a very constrictive art form to get your message out.
Some of the exercises you poets contrive would exhaust me.
This is very uplifting. thanks for sharing
Gene
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Hi, Gene!!
I thank you for your kind review. I find form poetry like putting together a puzzle, that's why I enjoy it.
Best,
jeni
Comment from Fridayauthor
This is an interesting construction that is simple but fits very well. What you did with it made a beautiful short verse that speaks to us with sound logic.
The key line, "Desire altered point of view," is most telling.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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This is an interesting construction that is simple but fits very well. What you did with it made a beautiful short verse that speaks to us with sound logic.
The key line, "Desire altered point of view," is most telling.
Thank you.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thank you for an insightful review and a very kind one as well. I appreciate it. Hope your Sunday is going well.
Best,
jeni
Comment from MissMerri
Once again, you have introduced me to a new form, one I've never heard of before, but it is intriguing. You do a good job with it, using the symbolism of a butterfly and the change the caterpillar makes in the cocoon, emerging as a beautiful winged creature. I like how you include "inspiration's work" in the process. That struck home with me. Very nice Jeni. I enjoy these glimpses into your fertile mind.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Once again, you have introduced me to a new form, one I've never heard of before, but it is intriguing. You do a good job with it, using the symbolism of a butterfly and the change the caterpillar makes in the cocoon, emerging as a beautiful winged creature. I like how you include "inspiration's work" in the process. That struck home with me. Very nice Jeni. I enjoy these glimpses into your fertile mind.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thank you, MissMerri, I do appreciate your lovely words of review and the compliment. I'm happy that you continue to take the time to read and review my poetry, in support of my writing efforts.
Best,
jeni
Comment from Sis Cat
Yes, I love this poem about personal metamorphoses and how you use a cocoon as a metaphor for unlocked human potential. Change, evolve, transition, emerge are all strong verbs about personal growth. Even though I have never read a Clarity Pyramid before, I enjoy what you have accomplished here in this smooth, encouraging poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Yes, I love this poem about personal metamorphoses and how you use a cocoon as a metaphor for unlocked human potential. Change, evolve, transition, emerge are all strong verbs about personal growth. Even though I have never read a Clarity Pyramid before, I enjoy what you have accomplished here in this smooth, encouraging poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Sis Cat,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me about this Clarity Pyramid. It is a form that was widely used around here years ago, but kind of took a nap, so I decided to wake it up! I'm glad that you enjoyed this poem and thank you for your encouragement.
yours,
jeni
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Moving on after a traumatic experience isn't easy and can take years. Once you have, it's like taking your first breath again, relief, in a way, that you came through that dark tunnel. This is truly an inspirational poem. Well done, Jeni, those darned 6s, we never have enough. xxx Sandra
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Moving on after a traumatic experience isn't easy and can take years. Once you have, it's like taking your first breath again, relief, in a way, that you came through that dark tunnel. This is truly an inspirational poem. Well done, Jeni, those darned 6s, we never have enough. xxx Sandra
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Sandra, please don't worry about the 6, it's enough for me to know that you enjoyed the poem! I appreciate your kind review.
jeni
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is awesome, Jeni! Where do you find this stuff LOL is there a Density Poem form too? thoroughly enjoyed this as it is so filled with universal truth and wisdom. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it. I will get back to the other after I clear the inbox, but it is slow going as I keep having to stop to rest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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This is awesome, Jeni! Where do you find this stuff LOL is there a Density Poem form too? thoroughly enjoyed this as it is so filled with universal truth and wisdom. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it. I will get back to the other after I clear the inbox, but it is slow going as I keep having to stop to rest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Monica! I'm glad that you like this. I find my forms on Shadowpoetry.com. I've never heard of a Density Poem form, if you come across one, let me know, or maybe I'll google it. That's okay on the other, take your time, my friend.
Love,
jeni
