Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Fanciful Fairies"a place to gather my poetic forms
42 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
You know, it's funny, but I was just thinking that your poem made me want to meet fairies, when up popped that line... so, you accomplished your goal with the poem.
Great job, my fanciful friend,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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You know, it's funny, but I was just thinking that your poem made me want to meet fairies, when up popped that line... so, you accomplished your goal with the poem.
Great job, my fanciful friend,
Rhonda
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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That's funny, Rhonda. I'm glad that my goal was accomplished and thank you for your kind words of review, my friend.
Best,
jeni
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Brilliantly written poem, you took me to the fantasy world of fairys, flowers and day dreaming, a pleasure to read, enjoyed,, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Brilliantly written poem, you took me to the fantasy world of fairys, flowers and day dreaming, a pleasure to read, enjoyed,, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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I'm glad you came along to my fantasy world with me, Dolly. Thanks for the kind words of review, they're much appreciated.]
Best,
jeni
Comment from William Ross
very good on this,a real hard style to do correctly, and it seems you did a fantastic job on this one. Thanks for the share and have a wonderful day
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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very good on this,a real hard style to do correctly, and it seems you did a fantastic job on this one. Thanks for the share and have a wonderful day
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind words of review, Bill, I always appreciate them. Have a special Sunday.
Best,
jeni
Comment from Susan Chetcuti
This is such a lovely poem. It put a smile o nmy face thinking about the fairies flying around. Your imagery about them is really good, and your ending line perfect with your shhhh, sleep soundly now and dream deeply. A nice piece.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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This is such a lovely poem. It put a smile o nmy face thinking about the fairies flying around. Your imagery about them is really good, and your ending line perfect with your shhhh, sleep soundly now and dream deeply. A nice piece.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Susan, I'm very happy that my poem put a smile on your face. I appreciate your kind words of review.
Best,
jeni
Comment from mermaids
The feel and flow of your words is magical and takes the reader to another place. Excellent use of consonants in "round moon most misty nights'. This poem makes the reader feel good and your last line is dream like, an excellent poem for the winter season.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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The feel and flow of your words is magical and takes the reader to another place. Excellent use of consonants in "round moon most misty nights'. This poem makes the reader feel good and your last line is dream like, an excellent poem for the winter season.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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I'm happy you thought this poem makes the reader feel good, that's awesome. Thank you for your kind review, mermaids.
Best,
jeni
Comment from RGstar
Regardless of the complexities, I judge the output, and it is beautiful, my friend. A lovely little write, and I mean that. It is suffice and should be no more.
Lovely poetic aura.
Well done.
M best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Regardless of the complexities, I judge the output, and it is beautiful, my friend. A lovely little write, and I mean that. It is suffice and should be no more.
Lovely poetic aura.
Well done.
M best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Hey, RG, how are you? Nice to see you. I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem and I thank you for your kind words of review. I really do appreciate them.
Happy Sunday,
jeni
Comment from evilynne
I am lousy at poetic forms, even though your author's notes are very helpful. I did enjoy your poem though, and I love fairies and their world. Evi
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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I am lousy at poetic forms, even though your author's notes are very helpful. I did enjoy your poem though, and I love fairies and their world. Evi
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks, evi. I appreciate your thoughts.
Comment from Sis Cat
This Alliterisen (Complex and Rhyming) shows a refine sense and skill of language and craft. You are definitely one of the most skilled poets on FanStory with a broad range of poetic forms from the obscure to the classic. The story you told here is like that of a mother telling a bedtime story about fancy fairies to her child, thus the invitation,
"You yearn to meet the fae folk this night ~
Shhhh! Sleep soundly now and dream deeply."
The sparkling flowers filled with fairies is a nice added touch.
Thank you for sharing your talent again.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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This Alliterisen (Complex and Rhyming) shows a refine sense and skill of language and craft. You are definitely one of the most skilled poets on FanStory with a broad range of poetic forms from the obscure to the classic. The story you told here is like that of a mother telling a bedtime story about fancy fairies to her child, thus the invitation,
"You yearn to meet the fae folk this night ~
Shhhh! Sleep soundly now and dream deeply."
The sparkling flowers filled with fairies is a nice added touch.
Thank you for sharing your talent again.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Dear Sis Cat,
Your compliment honors me greatly. I appreciate that sentiment truly. I'm happy that you left me your thoughts on this poem and once again, I thank you for your encouragement.
All my best,
jeni
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I can only imagine how hard this style is to write. What a lovely poem, your alliteration was superb, a 6 if I had one. I don't think I will try this form, I will just appreciate yours. LOL! Well done, Jeni, another amazing poem. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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I can only imagine how hard this style is to write. What a lovely poem, your alliteration was superb, a 6 if I had one. I don't think I will try this form, I will just appreciate yours. LOL! Well done, Jeni, another amazing poem. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Actually this isn't that hard of a form, at least I didn't think so. It was fun to write. I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem, sandra and thank you once again for a kind review.
jeni
Comment from Thal1959
You're braver than I am, Luna... I don't think I would even try this poetic form. I didn't even bother counting syllables, but I did notice the alliterations. The whole thing reads very smoothly and is enchanting throughout. Very enjoyable/
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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You're braver than I am, Luna... I don't think I would even try this poetic form. I didn't even bother counting syllables, but I did notice the alliterations. The whole thing reads very smoothly and is enchanting throughout. Very enjoyable/
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Well, thank you, Thal, for your kind words of review. I appreciate them, and you!
love,
luna
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It was my pleasure, Luna.
