Hora Haiku: A Gothic Tale of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "haiku (Varcolac)"by Gypsy Blue Rose and Dean Kuch
39 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
A haunting Gothic Hora Haiku. I too, can't wait to see where Claudiu and Mirela will take us next. Excellent and scary haiku - so fitting the tale of terror.
Well done Dean.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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A haunting Gothic Hora Haiku. I too, can't wait to see where Claudiu and Mirela will take us next. Excellent and scary haiku - so fitting the tale of terror.
Well done Dean.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Wow! You are so creative - even with your review responses. Niiiiice!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Well, I for one am glad she escaped. I do hope she stays hidden from the horrid Naamah. I shall have to wait and see. Good write.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Well, I for one am glad she escaped. I do hope she stays hidden from the horrid Naamah. I shall have to wait and see. Good write.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks for keeping up with the story, Barbara. I realize it's been awhile since a chapter was posted.
Have a wonderful week ahead,
Comment from Douglas Paul
Looks like a good addition to your book. Great satori that show an insight into the first two limes. Sorry it took me so long to get to this. Am trying to catch up some today
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Looks like a good addition to your book. Great satori that show an insight into the first two limes. Sorry it took me so long to get to this. Am trying to catch up some today
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I was wondering what happened to this story. I'm glad to see it back.
As always, well written and interesting. Your story grows through this series of Haikus. A unique and useful tool to tell a gothic story.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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I was wondering what happened to this story. I'm glad to see it back.
As always, well written and interesting. Your story grows through this series of Haikus. A unique and useful tool to tell a gothic story.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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You are so creative, Dean!!
Comment from victor 66
Wolves are truly magical beasts. I've spent a great deal of time in the woods of Northern Minnesota and have seen wolves only a few times. Wolves are fiercely independent and the vast majority of the time, only kill to protect or to feed themselves. Your choice of art to help dramatize your words, also very good. Best wishes, Dean.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Wolves are truly magical beasts. I've spent a great deal of time in the woods of Northern Minnesota and have seen wolves only a few times. Wolves are fiercely independent and the vast majority of the time, only kill to protect or to feed themselves. Your choice of art to help dramatize your words, also very good. Best wishes, Dean.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a great, haunting haiku chapter which shows the danger and treachery of Naamah towards. She does not feed nurturing things, but poisonous foul lies which can be lethal. Thank you for sharing this haiku about the "roots of all evil."
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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This is a great, haunting haiku chapter which shows the danger and treachery of Naamah towards. She does not feed nurturing things, but poisonous foul lies which can be lethal. Thank you for sharing this haiku about the "roots of all evil."
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
Comment from Bill Schott
The horror haiku story continues. I had lost track of this as I think it's been a bit since you last posted on this plot line. Still scary and interesting.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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The horror haiku story continues. I had lost track of this as I think it's been a bit since you last posted on this plot line. Still scary and interesting.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Very good tanka Dean - lines one and two interconnect perfectly and your satori is excellent 'the roots of all evil' - like money LOL. Very clever use of difficult words 'Varcolac' - werewolf? As usual your display is fantastic and so suitable for the tanka. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Very good tanka Dean - lines one and two interconnect perfectly and your satori is excellent 'the roots of all evil' - like money LOL. Very clever use of difficult words 'Varcolac' - werewolf? As usual your display is fantastic and so suitable for the tanka. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Another award winning (in my book at least) look forward to. I haven't been doing as much reviewing lately so have missed a great deal it looks like. Well done, my friends~Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Another award winning (in my book at least) look forward to. I haven't been doing as much reviewing lately so have missed a great deal it looks like. Well done, my friends~Debbie
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Is that Naamah whispering in Varcolac's ear turning him into a vicious, evil beast. Great artwork and a horrifying Haiku for this continuing story Dean.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Is that Naamah whispering in Varcolac's ear turning him into a vicious, evil beast. Great artwork and a horrifying Haiku for this continuing story Dean.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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No one does replies quite like you Dean,
smiling
ps hope you didn't get the other messed up one, fingers not working real well yet.
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No, I don't believe I did, Pearl
**smiling back**
Thanks so much again.
~Dean :)
