Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "It's Safe to Cry"a place to gather my poetic forms
35 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Goodness me, Jeni, you are such a prolific poet, and of so many styles too! I think to cry is the best healing medicine you could take, release is needed to bring the sadness, anger, hurt to the fore. We need to cry. Excellent triolet, my friend. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Goodness me, Jeni, you are such a prolific poet, and of so many styles too! I think to cry is the best healing medicine you could take, release is needed to bring the sadness, anger, hurt to the fore. We need to cry. Excellent triolet, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Sandra for the complimentary words in your review. I'm honored and flattered. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and support my poetry efforts.
Jeni
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi there are always tears when the time to separate arrives. It is sad. We are human ,to cry is human. Because we feel. This writing is a good lesson and shows a lot of patience, .it relates to every one.
Well done.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Hi there are always tears when the time to separate arrives. It is sad. We are human ,to cry is human. Because we feel. This writing is a good lesson and shows a lot of patience, .it relates to every one.
Well done.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Dear Danny, thanks for your insightful and kind words of review. I appreciate your support of my poetry efforts today.
peace,
Luna
Comment from jusylee72
All of us need to cry and not hide our tears. My father was deployed many times and it always changed who we were. I like that you take a form of poetry and make it your own.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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All of us need to cry and not hide our tears. My father was deployed many times and it always changed who we were. I like that you take a form of poetry and make it your own.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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I thank your father for his service to our country. I'm sure it DID always change who you were. Thank you for the compliment, I'm very flattered.
love,
jeni *smile*
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Jeni
This is a well-written triolet. It is safe to cry when we say goodbye, especially to loved ones. Unfortunately, we have to endure the pain and hope at least we can stop crying and be able to laugh at the good memories.
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Hi Jeni
This is a well-written triolet. It is safe to cry when we say goodbye, especially to loved ones. Unfortunately, we have to endure the pain and hope at least we can stop crying and be able to laugh at the good memories.
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Dear Mary,
Thank you for the insightful review. I hope you have a great day.
love,
jeni
Comment from marinadawn
Intriguing image you used , and I love the lines "don't force a laugh while there you stand " especially for our boys who have been cultured to have the stiff upper lip in the face of tragedy, we need to learn not to minimize our pain for pain over others loss indicate we care and cared
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Intriguing image you used , and I love the lines "don't force a laugh while there you stand " especially for our boys who have been cultured to have the stiff upper lip in the face of tragedy, we need to learn not to minimize our pain for pain over others loss indicate we care and cared
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your kind and insightful review. I appreciate it.
luna
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem that could be for many situations. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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This is a very well written poem that could be for many situations. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Teri, I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
love,
jeni *smile*
Comment from Thesis
This resonates with me, being the one who had to leave many times to be deployed. I like the tone and message you portray. Nervousness and uncertainty always play a role in a forced good bye. Fear is always in play as well. I think you did a good job with this.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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This resonates with me, being the one who had to leave many times to be deployed. I like the tone and message you portray. Nervousness and uncertainty always play a role in a forced good bye. Fear is always in play as well. I think you did a good job with this.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your service to our country, first and foremost. I thank you for this (unfortunately) knowledgeable review.
love,
jeni *smile*
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
How beautiful!!! It's definitely safe to cry when you say goodbye. I mean you as in everyone. I cry a lot. It's so hard for me to let go people I love.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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How beautiful!!! It's definitely safe to cry when you say goodbye. I mean you as in everyone. I cry a lot. It's so hard for me to let go people I love.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Gypsy. I'm happy you enjoyed this and I enjoyed reading your insightful review. I appreciate you continuing to support my writing efforts.
peace,
jeni
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you are welcome, my friend :)
big fat buddha hugs and blessings
gypsy sensei <3
Comment from nancyrabbrose
I gather the lover is leaving for some place such as Afghanistan, a sandy place. Of course the poem is perfect for any situation at which one's lover has to leave. You have written a very fine poem expressing a good truth to remember. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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I gather the lover is leaving for some place such as Afghanistan, a sandy place. Of course the poem is perfect for any situation at which one's lover has to leave. You have written a very fine poem expressing a good truth to remember. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Something like that, nancy. I'm happy you enjoyed this poem and I thank you for your kind review.
peace,
jeni
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
You've penned this triolet well, Jeni - your
words flowing well as they speak of
a parting which will bring forth tears -
it's always hard to say goodbye to those
we care about.
thank you for sharing this.
Margaret
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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You've penned this triolet well, Jeni - your
words flowing well as they speak of
a parting which will bring forth tears -
it's always hard to say goodbye to those
we care about.
thank you for sharing this.
Margaret
Comment Written 26-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for your insightful words of review, Margaret. I appreciate them and your continuing support of my poetry efforts.
peace,
luna
