The Sky's No Limit
1-7-1 contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I like your meaningful poem and message about life. It flows with excitement, adventure and fun. Your artwork choice is excellent.
angel123
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I like your meaningful poem and message about life. It flows with excitement, adventure and fun. Your artwork choice is excellent.
angel123
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
Comment from lyenochka
Great exhortation on the way to live! The last line has two meanings, that one is breathless because of fully living in breathtaking joy and of course, when we breathe our last. It's hard, though. The prose of life gets in the way.
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Great exhortation on the way to live! The last line has two meanings, that one is breathless because of fully living in breathtaking joy and of course, when we breathe our last. It's hard, though. The prose of life gets in the way.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
Haaaaa, another fine entry into this interesting contest. Breathing is always a good thing to keep on doing until you just can't anymore.
What an absolute delight and especially with the artwork. Can you imagine it?
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Haaaaa, another fine entry into this interesting contest. Breathing is always a good thing to keep on doing until you just can't anymore.
What an absolute delight and especially with the artwork. Can you imagine it?
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
Comment from Thal1959
Very nicely done. Good interplay between breathe and breath. Makes a good statement about enjoying life at the same time. Good luck in the contest.
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Very nicely done. Good interplay between breathe and breath. Makes a good statement about enjoying life at the same time. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
Comment from Zinnia48
It's amazing how much story is present in a poem with this brief structure. The fact t hat it began and ended with the same word is particularly powerful. Good luck with the contest! Caroline
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It's amazing how much story is present in a poem with this brief structure. The fact t hat it began and ended with the same word is particularly powerful. Good luck with the contest! Caroline
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 1-7-1 poem. You used a very good subject and the art work was great too. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes on the contest! Teri
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This is a very well written 1-7-1 poem. You used a very good subject and the art work was great too. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes on the contest! Teri
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
