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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write, a drunken snail indeed, what a thought, you described his actions in an amusing three lines, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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This is a fun write, a drunken snail indeed, what a thought, you described his actions in an amusing three lines, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Dolly!
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hmmm, it seems that snail had a little too much Bud Light! When I was still playing in the band, I saw a lot of folks on the dance floor walk/dance/stumble around the dance floor like that about midnight.
Interesting, fun and very creative! You're so full of it ... uh, talent, that is! Hugs, Sweet friend!
Alan x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Hmmm, it seems that snail had a little too much Bud Light! When I was still playing in the band, I saw a lot of folks on the dance floor walk/dance/stumble around the dance floor like that about midnight.
Interesting, fun and very creative! You're so full of it ... uh, talent, that is! Hugs, Sweet friend!
Alan x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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HAHAHAHA! No - I get it! HAHAHA You're right!
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Of course I'm right!!!!!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
If you catch that thing they're great broiled with a little garlic butter. Make sure your flower bed is organic. There could be an allergy problem.
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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If you catch that thing they're great broiled with a little garlic butter. Make sure your flower bed is organic. There could be an allergy problem.
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Hmmm... Thanks! And NO thanks for the snail snack.
Comment from c_lucas
It looks like the beer is within the snail. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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It looks like the beer is within the snail. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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I think you're right, Charlie!
