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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "haiku (beer bowl)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
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Comment from Sis Cat
This is a fun jumping-ahead haiku that made me smile. Yes, I bet those snails are drunk. Why do they crawl that way? They better not take a sobriety test.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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This is a fun jumping-ahead haiku that made me smile. Yes, I bet those snails are drunk. Why do they crawl that way? They better not take a sobriety test.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Andre!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
beer bowls 2 for garden snail control: now 7 the slime trails wobble 5
beer bowls <> for garden snail control: now = good connection but the last word is awkward, why not move it to the next line?
the slime trails wobble = hahaha poor little-drunk snails
I really like this one, sweetie pie. Good job!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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beer bowls 2 for garden snail control: now 7 the slime trails wobble 5
beer bowls <> for garden snail control: now = good connection but the last word is awkward, why not move it to the next line?
the slime trails wobble = hahaha poor little-drunk snails
I really like this one, sweetie pie. Good job!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thanks, MariVal!
Comment from Douglas Paul
I hope you know I love you, but this haiku leaves me flat. I just really don't get it. I guess I could be having another octopus moment LOL. I am in TS if you want to come and yell at me or enlighten me
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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I hope you know I love you, but this haiku leaves me flat. I just really don't get it. I guess I could be having another octopus moment LOL. I am in TS if you want to come and yell at me or enlighten me
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Haha! I'll try to come when I can. I have the baby again. But how can you not be blinded by my brilliance?! Haha!
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I had to order sunglasses on Amazon
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Good ones I hope. Not the cheap ones. I just keep getting brighter, you know...
Comment from royowen
A great example of a "snail trail" in the artwork Robyn. They are the enemy of the market gardener here. Excellent satori my friend, a good response, you've joined the haiku club I see, Robyn, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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A great example of a "snail trail" in the artwork Robyn. They are the enemy of the market gardener here. Excellent satori my friend, a good response, you've joined the haiku club I see, Robyn, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Roy!
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Welcome
Comment from BeasPeas
LOL! Well anything that won't kill will cure or make drunk. Clever and amusing. True to form, Robyn. It gave me my smile for the afternoon. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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LOL! Well anything that won't kill will cure or make drunk. Clever and amusing. True to form, Robyn. It gave me my smile for the afternoon. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Marilyn!
Comment from judiverse
You mean you have to waste perfectly good beer to get rid of snails? I love the result of the snail control effort--wobbly trails. The picture illustrates perfectly. Hope they don't have to take a sobriety test. Plus, who checks their ID? Very humorous and clever. judi
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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You mean you have to waste perfectly good beer to get rid of snails? I love the result of the snail control effort--wobbly trails. The picture illustrates perfectly. Hope they don't have to take a sobriety test. Plus, who checks their ID? Very humorous and clever. judi
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Great questions, Judi! No answers! Haha! Thanks!
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You're welcome. I don't know how you'd judge a snail's age. judi
Comment from Treischel
Hah! Your pure humor shines through once more in this hilarious Haiku about snails encountering beer bowls. That picture of the sand scribble tops it all. Bravo!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Hah! Your pure humor shines through once more in this hilarious Haiku about snails encountering beer bowls. That picture of the sand scribble tops it all. Bravo!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Tom!
Comment from DR DIP
haha love this one A pissed snail how cute A snail trail and a very wobbly one at that. You know I haven't seen a snail at home for a while Guess I am looking in the wrong places!
dip
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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haha love this one A pissed snail how cute A snail trail and a very wobbly one at that. You know I haven't seen a snail at home for a while Guess I am looking in the wrong places!
dip
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Haha. Put out a bowl of beer. You'll find 'em!
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Hick!! lol
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Wonderful, this made me smile.
A lovely haiku with a great picture to accompany.
Will look out for this next time I go to my local beer garden.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Wonderful, this made me smile.
A lovely haiku with a great picture to accompany.
Will look out for this next time I go to my local beer garden.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thanks!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ain't nothin' worse than havin' a buncha drunken slugs hangin' around in yer garden, Robyn.
Not to mention snails are bad enough, heh-heh.
Escargot, anyone?
Here's to beer...
--BELCH!!!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Ain't nothin' worse than havin' a buncha drunken slugs hangin' around in yer garden, Robyn.
Not to mention snails are bad enough, heh-heh.
Escargot, anyone?
Here's to beer...
--BELCH!!!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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HAHAHA! Thanks!
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:)
