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Comment from DR DIP
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ah the old puffer toad fish! those bloody things used to always pinch my bait when I was fishing for leather jacket deeper down. little bastards . then you have to get them off your hook! Nice description of one Badge

dip

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
    Thanks for your continued support, and I love your stories of contact with my subject characters.
    Blessings,
    Brother Badger
Comment from MissMerri
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Thanks, but no thank you. I don't care to try this delicacy. But... reading your haiku was fun and easy and I felt perfectly safe. You do these so easily. I'm jealous! It is a form that causes me much anxiety, so I tend to avoid it altogether. But maybe if I read enough of yours, I can learn to do it. MM

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    Thanks so much for your continued support, it is always a pleasure to hear from you!
    Blessings,
    Darren
Comment from winnona
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A well-written haiku club challenge. The words flow well and even though they have a humorous side to them are still a well-written haiku. Your artwork completed the piece well.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    Thanks so much for your continued support!
    Blessings ,
    Brother Badger
Comment from rama devi
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Fun photo. Good satirical 5-7-5. Let' let the puffer guy do it and not our own egos. Good flow. Good tone. Enjoyed the message. Clever and unique way to present it.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much for your continued support, it is always a pleasure to hear from you!
    Blessings,
    Brother Badger
reply by rama devi on 24-Jan-2017
    Thank you, dear Brother Badger~ Ditto! Blessings, rd
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Badger,

Your poem was written very well and a joy to read.
I was wondering what the picture was all about.
Thanks for telling us it was a different kind of fish.

Kat

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    Thanks so much for your continued support, it is always a pleasure to hear from you!
    Blessings,
    Brother Badger