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Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Pretty; deadly!"Collection of haikus
4 total reviews
Comment from DR DIP
pity the shot is out of focus lol Nice write I had never heard of this fish before this haiku. So its sting is deadly? It's a rather ugly fish I must say
dip
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
pity the shot is out of focus lol Nice write I had never heard of this fish before this haiku. So its sting is deadly? It's a rather ugly fish I must say
dip
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your continued support.
Darren
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I have edited, got a much nicer image.
Enjoy!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I am enjoying your short pieces, but some I just done know what to say and I am sorry. this one isknow about and you are so right, don't get too close. Good count and style
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
I am enjoying your short pieces, but some I just done know what to say and I am sorry. this one isknow about and you are so right, don't get too close. Good count and style
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your continued support.
Darren
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend using a great picture choice you have done very well using this form again I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
Yes this is well written my friend using a great picture choice you have done very well using this form again I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thanks so much for your continued support.
Darren
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. Fish can be beautiful to look at burt it is not always wise to touch them without a very good reason and protection.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
A very well-written haiku. Fish can be beautiful to look at burt it is not always wise to touch them without a very good reason and protection.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your continued support.
Darren