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Comment from DR DIP
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pity the shot is out of focus lol Nice write I had never heard of this fish before this haiku. So its sting is deadly? It's a rather ugly fish I must say

dip

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    Thanks for your continued support.
    Darren
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    I have edited, got a much nicer image.
    Enjoy!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I am enjoying your short pieces, but some I just done know what to say and I am sorry. this one isknow about and you are so right, don't get too close. Good count and style

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    Thanks for your continued support.
    Darren
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is well written my friend using a great picture choice you have done very well using this form again I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    Thanks so much for your continued support.
    Darren
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written haiku. Fish can be beautiful to look at burt it is not always wise to touch them without a very good reason and protection.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    Thanks for your continued support.
    Darren