You'll Never Walk Alone
Poem for my son3 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a tender and touching poem written from the heart of a parent--a dad--which is even more meaningful. Although we all feel this way about our children, you have expressed it perfectly. Marilyn
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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This is a tender and touching poem written from the heart of a parent--a dad--which is even more meaningful. Although we all feel this way about our children, you have expressed it perfectly. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you, your kind words mean a lot.
Comment from JACK2
First I want to commend you for this wonderful tribute to your son. I can tell you love him very much I thought that you did a great job describing your love and close bond that you share. I thought the words you used highlighted the verses in such a descriptive way. The only things I would point out would be on line 6 where you wrote boy and son I'm not 100 percent sure but boy should be a capitol and line 12 the boy in that line. Then on line 20 the poem reads mum this may be your intention just depends what part of the world your from, other then that your poem is well thought an full of love and pride. If it my poem I would of broke it up into stanza's so to give a break to your readers just my opinion I write very long poems myself so I just leaned to break up a bit for the reader great poem . coop
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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First I want to commend you for this wonderful tribute to your son. I can tell you love him very much I thought that you did a great job describing your love and close bond that you share. I thought the words you used highlighted the verses in such a descriptive way. The only things I would point out would be on line 6 where you wrote boy and son I'm not 100 percent sure but boy should be a capitol and line 12 the boy in that line. Then on line 20 the poem reads mum this may be your intention just depends what part of the world your from, other then that your poem is well thought an full of love and pride. If it my poem I would of broke it up into stanza's so to give a break to your readers just my opinion I write very long poems myself so I just leaned to break up a bit for the reader great poem . coop
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for your kinds words and especially your advice, I will certainly take it on board.
Have a great day.
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Your welcome friend God bless you.
Comment from robyn corum
This is a super poem for a well-loved child. I can see how any child would love to be given a poem from a father like this one. I wish you good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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This is a super poem for a well-loved child. I can see how any child would love to be given a poem from a father like this one. I wish you good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your kind words
