Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Sweet and romantic swirl of fragrant colors! Nice alliteration of P and B and consonance of S, W and K. True to form as per directives. Very fine presentation...
Nice artwork!

Love,
rd

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017

Namaste rama, I liked the idea that they had their own tree. Thanks for the insightful review.I always learn from your comments, cheers, j

reply by rama devi on 23-Jan-2017

:-))))) Namaste!

Comment from Marykelly

Excellent

Spring showers are a harbinger of the season and in this case the cherry blossoms are like the gentle spring rain giving added importance to the cherry tree. The romantic location under the tree gives even more importance.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017

Thanks for the insightful review, cheers, j

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Light, soft, romantic poem that fits the line and syllable count required. The image is a great match for the words and helps set a tone of warmth.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017

Thanks for the review. Cheers, j