The Master's Hand
Winter Wonderland71 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
These three abcb quatrains tell how beautiful the Earth can be, even in Winter, I like the metaphor of the polar bear with the wind. The words also remind you who created the beauty.
Keep writing
dp
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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These three abcb quatrains tell how beautiful the Earth can be, even in Winter, I like the metaphor of the polar bear with the wind. The words also remind you who created the beauty.
Keep writing
dp
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you dp for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
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No problem.
dp
Comment from jusylee72
Lovely, descriptive poem of the beginning of winter. It is so quiet when it snows and yet in the morning the sun really does shine brightly and beautifully. Thank you for your words.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Lovely, descriptive poem of the beginning of winter. It is so quiet when it snows and yet in the morning the sun really does shine brightly and beautifully. Thank you for your words.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Ulla
This is a beautiful poem with a wonderful imagery depicting the wintry feel and landscape that comes with it. Wonderful. I really enjoyed your poem. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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This is a beautiful poem with a wonderful imagery depicting the wintry feel and landscape that comes with it. Wonderful. I really enjoyed your poem. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you Ulla for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Drew Crago
Very new to reviewing: However, I think this is a very good description of the incoming winter. The colorful life like description gives a full overview of what a northern winter could look like blowing in. The ending is exactly what the aftermath of a winter storm would like "the morning came, a brilliant sun". Is simply amazing!! Well done!
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Very new to reviewing: However, I think this is a very good description of the incoming winter. The colorful life like description gives a full overview of what a northern winter could look like blowing in. The ending is exactly what the aftermath of a winter storm would like "the morning came, a brilliant sun". Is simply amazing!! Well done!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you Drew for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
For a new reviewer - you do just fine.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from crybry67
Wonderful imagery, alliteration, and use of rhyme.
I also like your presentation, lovely artwork you chose. Blessings to you... Christy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Wonderful imagery, alliteration, and use of rhyme.
I also like your presentation, lovely artwork you chose. Blessings to you... Christy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you Christy for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. There is only one master painter that can paint the most wonderful scenes of nature wherever we find ourselves to witness.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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A very well-written poem. There is only one master painter that can paint the most wonderful scenes of nature wherever we find ourselves to witness.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you Sandra for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well done Janet. Great imagery wrapped up in tetrameter and abcb rhyme. I love it when there is a mist of ice crystals floating in the air sparkling like tiny diamonds. Lovely picture. xoxo Nancy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Well done Janet. Great imagery wrapped up in tetrameter and abcb rhyme. I love it when there is a mist of ice crystals floating in the air sparkling like tiny diamonds. Lovely picture. xoxo Nancy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you Nancy for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
This is a lovely winter's poem, Janet! There is something so beautiful about waking up to everything blanketed in white. Your poem captures this feeling very well. Excellent rhyming and a smooth flow with good imagery created for your reader. My favorite line is "the polar air came lumbering" ... creative! Both your poem and the artwork befit one another perfectly!
A very nice poem, Janet!
Connie
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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This is a lovely winter's poem, Janet! There is something so beautiful about waking up to everything blanketed in white. Your poem captures this feeling very well. Excellent rhyming and a smooth flow with good imagery created for your reader. My favorite line is "the polar air came lumbering" ... creative! Both your poem and the artwork befit one another perfectly!
A very nice poem, Janet!
Connie
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
As a lover of nature and the seasons,
I thoroughly enjoyed this - beautifully
writtern - the words with vivid imagery
cleverly presented.
thanks for sharing this, my friend.
Margaret
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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As a lover of nature and the seasons,
I thoroughly enjoyed this - beautifully
writtern - the words with vivid imagery
cleverly presented.
thanks for sharing this, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you Margaret for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A beautiful poem that uses imagery to paint an explicit picture of the snow storm, and its subsequent sparkling gift left behind. It was all painted by the Master's hand. Wow, how profound.
Thanks for the share!!
Rhonda
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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A beautiful poem that uses imagery to paint an explicit picture of the snow storm, and its subsequent sparkling gift left behind. It was all painted by the Master's hand. Wow, how profound.
Thanks for the share!!
Rhonda
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you Rhonda for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
