The Master's Hand
Winter Wonderland71 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
This is a delightful piece of poetry dear Janet! I love the seasonal change. And I applaud your ingenuity of how the day turns upside down. Nice one my friend!
Thanks for sharing!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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This is a delightful piece of poetry dear Janet! I love the seasonal change. And I applaud your ingenuity of how the day turns upside down. Nice one my friend!
Thanks for sharing!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you Rebekka for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and those special six stars. I'm so pleased that you liked this one. It was fun to write.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from John Parkin
You captured the essence of one of natures wonders and a polar storm though traitorous, can have beauty like no other storm. There is nothing quite like waking up to a sunny day all covered with white and hearing how quiet the world can be for a few moments. The flow was great and the rhyming terrific.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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You captured the essence of one of natures wonders and a polar storm though traitorous, can have beauty like no other storm. There is nothing quite like waking up to a sunny day all covered with white and hearing how quiet the world can be for a few moments. The flow was great and the rhyming terrific.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you John for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments. You are so right, waking up to a snow covered land on a sunny morning is breathtaking.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from rama devi
I absolutely adored reading this aloud! Such eloquence and fine cadence with lovely, masterfully woven phonetics, especially the first stanza (love the rhyming too) and the bouncy second stanza as well.
Such fluid flow. Yum!
A perfect closing note, too:
Bright sparkling flakes of diamond dust
all painted by the Master's hand.
Love the AHA of spirituality in the closing line.
Delightful work--and nit free. Lovely presentation as well.
Captures a mood and has fine imagery. Six stars!
Love,
rd
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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I absolutely adored reading this aloud! Such eloquence and fine cadence with lovely, masterfully woven phonetics, especially the first stanza (love the rhyming too) and the bouncy second stanza as well.
Such fluid flow. Yum!
A perfect closing note, too:
Bright sparkling flakes of diamond dust
all painted by the Master's hand.
Love the AHA of spirituality in the closing line.
Delightful work--and nit free. Lovely presentation as well.
Captures a mood and has fine imagery. Six stars!
Love,
rd
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you rd for this most encouraging review and those special sixs! I always look forward to your reviews.
When I was ready to post this one, I actually read it again and said to myself, now what would rd change or improve? Then, I added some punctuation. I am delighted with your encouragement.
Thank you again my friend.
Blessings
Janet
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Oh wow, how wonderful is that! hank you, dear. Honored---and glad to help and inspire~! Big love and blessings, rd
Comment from June Sargent
A winter wonderland crafted by the Master but beautifully described with your words. Your poetry painted a lovely scene that drew us into a storm, but gave us a view after the storm as well. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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A winter wonderland crafted by the Master but beautifully described with your words. Your poetry painted a lovely scene that drew us into a storm, but gave us a view after the storm as well. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you June for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's word flow and connect well. The words are
descriptive, spiritual and thought provoking. The artwork is perfect as it
compliments the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Excellent Poem! The author's word flow and connect well. The words are
descriptive, spiritual and thought provoking. The artwork is perfect as it
compliments the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from happykat4
The poem depicts a ponderous sight and follows the snowstorm from beginning to the end.the words used paint the scene and in the end described as nature's best Toby the hands of God. Excellent.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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The poem depicts a ponderous sight and follows the snowstorm from beginning to the end.the words used paint the scene and in the end described as nature's best Toby the hands of God. Excellent.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Cedar
This is a very well written poem about "Old Man Winter." You describe the scenes with perfect rhyming, but I must admit, just looking at that picture gave me cold-chills. We have been having a very mild winter here, so far...Take care. Bill
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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This is a very well written poem about "Old Man Winter." You describe the scenes with perfect rhyming, but I must admit, just looking at that picture gave me cold-chills. We have been having a very mild winter here, so far...Take care. Bill
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you Bill for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Our winter has been relatively mild here in NC as well but I visited northwest PA recently and they have been buried more than once in the fluffy white stuff. haha
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Franklin Price
A wonderful picturesque poem of a blizzard and the startling results. New fallen snow is about as beautiful as anything else in nature. It's very interesting because it has so much character without consideration of color. Perhaps we humans should remember this in all seasons. Thanks for a great write
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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A wonderful picturesque poem of a blizzard and the startling results. New fallen snow is about as beautiful as anything else in nature. It's very interesting because it has so much character without consideration of color. Perhaps we humans should remember this in all seasons. Thanks for a great write
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you Franklin for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is beautifully penned. Your use of imagery was so well executed I actually got chills here LOL. I could not help but thinking that God has a sense of humor as He paints the earth's canvas so stunningly in the winter BUT inviting though it might be we are much better off inside where it is warm. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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This is beautifully penned. Your use of imagery was so well executed I actually got chills here LOL. I could not help but thinking that God has a sense of humor as He paints the earth's canvas so stunningly in the winter BUT inviting though it might be we are much better off inside where it is warm. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you Moonica for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from TPAC
Writer illustrates great talents in this write, deep thought-provoking views that grip the heart, statements endearing with promise. My suggestion for improvement of the work is cutting of its fat. For example: Like giant bears of snowy white unto Like snowy white giant bears. I thought more precise aiding this write flow.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Writer illustrates great talents in this write, deep thought-provoking views that grip the heart, statements endearing with promise. My suggestion for improvement of the work is cutting of its fat. For example: Like giant bears of snowy white unto Like snowy white giant bears. I thought more precise aiding this write flow.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you for you thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and I'm so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
