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Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "The Lady and Her Young Man"poems from Picture This Challenge
42 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Aw, how sweet Sandra. Sometimes dreams do come true.
This is a lovely story and one older than time. How
parents can disown a child for loving the wrong person is beyond me. Great Heptameter and aabb rhyme. Well done.xoxo Nancy
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Aw, how sweet Sandra. Sometimes dreams do come true.
This is a lovely story and one older than time. How
parents can disown a child for loving the wrong person is beyond me. Great Heptameter and aabb rhyme. Well done.xoxo Nancy
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, Nancy, for another of your lovely reviews, and I'll be flying over personally to give you a big hug for the 6! I wish that were possible, wouldn't we have a laugh. I'm glad you liked it, my friend. :) Sandra xsx
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Don't do it. We are literally snowed in. LOL
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Oh, Okay then, I'll fly over in the Spring!! LOL. xxxx You keep warm!
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Good idea.Haha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh my lady, this is absolutely wonderful in flow and rhyme. The story line is excellently done and the whole piece is worthy of more than a six. Very well done
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Oh my lady, this is absolutely wonderful in flow and rhyme. The story line is excellently done and the whole piece is worthy of more than a six. Very well done
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you so very much, my dear Barb, for the lovely 6 stars, and the fabulous review. Bless your heart, my friend. :) xxx Sandra
Comment from William Ross
What a wonderful story poem you have written about love, great rhyming with a great meter, reads beautifully through. thanks for sharing and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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What a wonderful story poem you have written about love, great rhyming with a great meter, reads beautifully through. thanks for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Oh, thank you so much, William, that is such a lovely review and all those lovely stars! Thank you!! :) Sandra xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A delightfully rhymed poem full of hope and anticipation and a wonderful story of love conquering all, despite initial hardship, beautifully penned poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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A delightfully rhymed poem full of hope and anticipation and a wonderful story of love conquering all, despite initial hardship, beautifully penned poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Dolly, I am delighted you enjoyed my poem. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Treischel
I always love a story with a happy ending. And this is a well written series of aabb rhymed quatrains. A tale of romance. Intolerance, and redemption. The cadence was smooth. It flowed well. A sweet ending.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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I always love a story with a happy ending. And this is a well written series of aabb rhymed quatrains. A tale of romance. Intolerance, and redemption. The cadence was smooth. It flowed well. A sweet ending.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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I do too, Tom, too many sad stories in the world today. Thank you so much for your lovely review, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from barkingdog
This is a lovely story poem, Sandra.
Status is still important to many, causing this unfortunate situation to still exist.
How a parent can disown his/her child is beyond me.
Fine rhyming quatrains.
A most enjoyable post.
:) e
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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This is a lovely story poem, Sandra.
Status is still important to many, causing this unfortunate situation to still exist.
How a parent can disown his/her child is beyond me.
Fine rhyming quatrains.
A most enjoyable post.
:) e
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Ellen, I'm glad you liked it. Yes, I don't understand that either, I couldn't disown my children for wanting to be with someone they loved. Some even murder their daughter for the 'shame and dishonor' it brings the family. So cruel.
:) Sandra xx
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good poem with a happy ending. You employ good rhyming throughout. The meter is excellent. Too bad this isn't a contest entry.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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A very good poem with a happy ending. You employ good rhyming throughout. The meter is excellent. Too bad this isn't a contest entry.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, Tom. What a lovely review! :) Sandra xxxx
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written romantic poem. The heart fall in love with whoever it fancy, it does not ask about status and age, and love that gies through trouble and and still stand together can be seen as true love.
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A very well-written romantic poem. The heart fall in love with whoever it fancy, it does not ask about status and age, and love that gies through trouble and and still stand together can be seen as true love.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Sandra, for this lovely review. That is the nice thing about true love, it has no prejudices. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from royowen
I do like a story with a happy ending, beautifully written story in a poem. Sandra, what a great imagination you have, and coupled with a great ability, and bingo you have a good work, written in aabb quatrains in very eloquent language, we done Sandra, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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I do like a story with a happy ending, beautifully written story in a poem. Sandra, what a great imagination you have, and coupled with a great ability, and bingo you have a good work, written in aabb quatrains in very eloquent language, we done Sandra, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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I love happy endings, too, Roy. We don't hear of many in the world today. :( I'm glad you liked it, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
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Not many romantics left
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of the poem reminisces a secret love affair between a man of humble background and a high class lady.
The work highlights the secret outings of the lovers, their unfortunate stigmatisation as social outcasts, and the eventual blossoming of their heart's desire occasioned by the benevolence of the Duchess.
The work constitutes a significant commentary that gives credence to the fact that "when one door closes, another door opens".
Excellent work! Bravo!
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The objective correlative of the poem reminisces a secret love affair between a man of humble background and a high class lady.
The work highlights the secret outings of the lovers, their unfortunate stigmatisation as social outcasts, and the eventual blossoming of their heart's desire occasioned by the benevolence of the Duchess.
The work constitutes a significant commentary that gives credence to the fact that "when one door closes, another door opens".
Excellent work! Bravo!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for your lovely, detailed review, Lloyd, that was so nice of you. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xx
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Ride on Sandra!
Keep on flourishing!
