Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The Distance to a Dream"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from azwildrosa
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Again another great read full of inspiration and great imagery making this a pleasurable read. Thank you for sharing. I'm always looking forward to your next read.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Again another great read full of inspiration and great imagery making this a pleasurable read. Thank you for sharing. I'm always looking forward to your next read.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much! Your words are so kind, and I appreciate that you take the time to follow my work.
Comment from mvbrooks
Fun read as one feels like they are being led into a dream (and the final line tells the reader they were right). The images are strong of creatures and moonlight and such. It is whimsical--yet includes a message to add some of this "dream" to each day.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Fun read as one feels like they are being led into a dream (and the final line tells the reader they were right). The images are strong of creatures and moonlight and such. It is whimsical--yet includes a message to add some of this "dream" to each day.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the interesting review! I loved reading it. Thanks as well for reading my poem and supporting my work.
Comment from Susan Chetcuti
Your poem was indeed enchanting. If only every dream could be as captivating as what you have written in this lovely piece. My favourite line is, the distance to a dream. Keep writing your wonderful work.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Your poem was indeed enchanting. If only every dream could be as captivating as what you have written in this lovely piece. My favourite line is, the distance to a dream. Keep writing your wonderful work.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you for reading my poem and this gracious review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Luna,
I really like this double etheree. You mastered the poetic form twofold. This poem comes bearing fantasy, dreams and inspiration. I like the forests and beasts analogies to describe an enchanted dream.
This was a joy to read and review.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Luna,
I really like this double etheree. You mastered the poetic form twofold. This poem comes bearing fantasy, dreams and inspiration. I like the forests and beasts analogies to describe an enchanted dream.
This was a joy to read and review.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Dear Poetic Friend, thank you for reading my poem. I'm happy that you enjoyed it so well and thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Jeni - a very well written double Etheree, perfect syllable count throughout. I've not seen one written this way before. Usually it's the first one reversed. But I like this very much as it continues the story and makes for an interesting read. Well done. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Hi Jeni - a very well written double Etheree, perfect syllable count throughout. I've not seen one written this way before. Usually it's the first one reversed. But I like this very much as it continues the story and makes for an interesting read. Well done. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thanks, Dorothy. I'm so glad you liked this. Thanks for the review.
Comment from LIJ Red
Creedence Clearwater Revival sang about all the amazing things to be seen out the back door...this Diamond Etheree looks like an excellent bit of poetry to me.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Creedence Clearwater Revival sang about all the amazing things to be seen out the back door...this Diamond Etheree looks like an excellent bit of poetry to me.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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I'm going to see Ricky Skaggs and Bruce Hornsby on March 3. Fogarty is a master.
Comment from mbroyles2
Lovely images of fantasy within a peaceful setting.
Dreams like this lead to wonderful sleep and joy in the morning.
Great visualization.
Michael
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Lovely images of fantasy within a peaceful setting.
Dreams like this lead to wonderful sleep and joy in the morning.
Great visualization.
Michael
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Michael, thank you for the kind review. I'm happy that you enjoyed this and got some imagery from it.
love and light,
jeni
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I dream a lot and mine are never so fantastical as your poem, but my day life is good and filled with hope and wonderment just like your beautifully written poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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I dream a lot and mine are never so fantastical as your poem, but my day life is good and filled with hope and wonderment just like your beautifully written poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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That's wonderful, Dolly. I'm happy for you that your days are filled with happiness and lustre! I appreciate you reading and reviewing my poem.
light and love,
luna
Comment from Lu Saluna
A magical and enchanting poem of entering a dream land of wonderment. Well written and well described. Tempting one to go and enter an alternate world and play in the enchanting world of Hobbits and Centaurs. Magical creatures and beings who are joyous and strong. What a wonderful place to be.
Very well written.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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A magical and enchanting poem of entering a dream land of wonderment. Well written and well described. Tempting one to go and enter an alternate world and play in the enchanting world of Hobbits and Centaurs. Magical creatures and beings who are joyous and strong. What a wonderful place to be.
Very well written.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Lu, your review is awesome. If you decide you want to go play, look me up and we'll meet up in our dreams!
Love,
jeni
Comment from DonandVicki
I like the feel of this poem of yours, Luna. It opens the imagination and lets it run wild. Very good choice of artwork that complements your work well, very dream like.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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I like the feel of this poem of yours, Luna. It opens the imagination and lets it run wild. Very good choice of artwork that complements your work well, very dream like.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much. I'm glad that you enjoyed. Have a great day.
love and light,
luna
