Wind howls
Shaking it up all night long.2 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written and a good contest entry that made me smile the syllable count is correct I enjoyed good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Yes this is well written and a good contest entry that made me smile the syllable count is correct I enjoyed good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from loismddavis
you fulfilled the requirements of the prompt and ended with a good satori--I do have a small question about the picture which is just personal choice --I would have chosen a picture of the subject of the metaphor--however you chose a great picture
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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you fulfilled the requirements of the prompt and ended with a good satori--I do have a small question about the picture which is just personal choice --I would have chosen a picture of the subject of the metaphor--however you chose a great picture
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Yes, I searched for a stripper picture but couldn't find one I liked, o I referred back to the title. Thanks for reviewing.
