Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

'rainbow in the dark'...how beautiful! Nameless colors indeed...some of the colors are beyond description...so intense are their hues. This is a wonderful haiku!! Blessings...

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response, Irish Rain .
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

reply by Irish Rain on 26-Jan-2017

You're most welcome!!

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

This is really good. Strong imagery in the first 2 lines. I love the satori - good insight into the essence of the first 2 lines. I would give you a six for this if I had any left

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

Thank you, Douglas, ,for this great review for my haiku. I'm pleased you enjoyed the imagery and satori, and thank you for wanting to award it a sixth star. That means a lot to me from a fellow haikuist. Thank you very much for your kind words and response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

I really like this haiku, Karyn. It's easy to imagine these tropical fish swimming in the dark ocean and lighting the water up with rainbows.

Just a beauty, and oh so true.

Gloria

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for your kind review, Gloria, and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written full of imagery and a very colourful presentation I enjoyed you have done really well my friend regards Jill

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response, Jill.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

"rainbow in the dark" indeed. Very well done, Irish. I like this haiku and I am very impressed with this Haiku club that everyone seems to be having fun with. Unfortunately ALL of my time is dedicated dto reviewing and working on my revived novel. Im can't remember....did you read it the first time when I posted it in 2012? I ask because I've seen no reviews from you and am assuming that's the reason. Good job on this haiku, my friend. Blessings. Bob

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

Thank you, Bob, for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response. Yes, I read and reviewed your chapters when they were posted years ago. Good luck with your revival.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from nancyrabbrose

Excellent

I really like the last line of your poem: "rainbow in the dark" -- very clever. The illustration you chose is perfect for your poem. Extremely well done. Using the word "color" to say that they swim the ocean is very creative.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response, Nan y. I'm delighted you enjoyed the satori line..
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from mermaids

Exceptional

I am in awe of your words. Excellent description of beautiful fish, "rainbow in the dark" is a perfect line. The colorful fish are a rainbow in the dark. It is also a joy to read a poem about fish, not many poems about them. Excellent haiku form.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

Mermaids, I'm so thrilled you liked the haiku enough to award it an extra star. Thank you for your great review, generous rating, and kind words. I truly appreciate your taking he time to read no share your comments. Your awesome response means a lot to me.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi
I really like this haiku, It is so colorful and has wonderful imagery. There are such beautiful colorful fish that swim beneath the bottom of the sea. I like how you refer to is as "rainbow in the dark"

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

Thank you so much, Mary, for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response. I'm glad you enjoyed the satori line and imagery of the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Rhonni

Excellent

You captured this underwater paradise beautifully...I like the subject and the photo is perfect for this piece. There is a tropical world deep below the surface and you describe it well with few words, nicely written!

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response, Rhonni. Thanks.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Wow! I really love this haiku you have penned. As I looked at it at first I saw all the pretty fish and the colors. It made me smile as when I go to babysit Greyson he has a fish named Mr. Bubble. I get to see him every day too. This made me think of than and then your great wording and the picture! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response, Teri. I bet you love seeing your grandson every day.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)