Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "haiku (nameless colors)*"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
57 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear indianairish! i love the satori, it ties the whole poem together. i also like the concept of nameless colors. equality in a school.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear indianairish! i love the satori, it ties the whole poem together. i also like the concept of nameless colors. equality in a school.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you for reading my haiku, Rebekka, and for taking the time to share your thoughts. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for your kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. The colourful fish in the dark ocean become the rainbow in the deepest places where the sun are unable to reach.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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A very well-written haiku. The colourful fish in the dark ocean become the rainbow in the deepest places where the sun are unable to reach.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response, Sandra. You completely understood what I wanted to convey in my poem and truly appreciate that,
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
IndianaIrish - this is a really lovely haiku with a gorgeous picture. Your lines one and two interconnect perfectly and your line three, using good metaphor, is an excellent satori. Lovely work. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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IndianaIrish - this is a really lovely haiku with a gorgeous picture. Your lines one and two interconnect perfectly and your line three, using good metaphor, is an excellent satori. Lovely work. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response, Dorothy.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Karyn, I like this haiku it has a statement and impact with a great Satori I could see the fish even without the image so well done for a well thought out Haiku fro the challenge Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Hi Karyn, I like this haiku it has a statement and impact with a great Satori I could see the fish even without the image so well done for a well thought out Haiku fro the challenge Cheers Christine
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response, Chrissy. I'm pleased you liked the satori.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful. I like the progress from the focus on colors (colors we have yet to see?) and then the second line takes us into the ocean depths where there is no light which is required to see color. The final line that presents us with a puzzle of a "rainbow" created with the light.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Beautiful. I like the progress from the focus on colors (colors we have yet to see?) and then the second line takes us into the ocean depths where there is no light which is required to see color. The final line that presents us with a puzzle of a "rainbow" created with the light.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response, Lyenochka. There must be some incredible rainbows down there with colors from the tropical fish we've never seen..
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Ella25
What a beautiful composition. You captured it so well with the rainbow colours and words from the under deep. Great work, my friend. With love, Ella
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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What a beautiful composition. You captured it so well with the rainbow colours and words from the under deep. Great work, my friend. With love, Ella
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your comments and encouraging response, Ella. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
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You are welcome, Karyn. It was a pleasure. With love, Ella
Comment from Thal1959
Very well done. I am not partial to Haiku, but it can be artistic at times. I usually expect a "seasonal" reference for the kigo, but a "natural" one is also common. The Satori reminded me of a line from one of my poems. It reflects on God placing color in the darkest places.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Very well done. I am not partial to Haiku, but it can be artistic at times. I usually expect a "seasonal" reference for the kigo, but a "natural" one is also common. The Satori reminded me of a line from one of my poems. It reflects on God placing color in the darkest places.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your kind review and for taking the time to read and share your thoughts regarding my haiku. I appreciate your commenting on a poetry style you're not fond of..
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
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It was my pleasure.
Comment from GWinterwin
Wow that is a beautiful picture. This just shows the awesome beauty of almighty God. So many different colors just make me thankful for such beauty. Good words to tell about it.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Wow that is a beautiful picture. This just shows the awesome beauty of almighty God. So many different colors just make me thankful for such beauty. Good words to tell about it.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Thank you, GWinterwin, for this lovely review for my haiku. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and truly appreciate your taking the time to read and write a review. Thank you for sharing your kind comments.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Janet Foor
Beautiful ! Gorgeous picture to accompany this lovely haiku. I loved the satori line. The imagery is amazing. Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Beautiful ! Gorgeous picture to accompany this lovely haiku. I loved the satori line. The imagery is amazing. Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Janet, I'm so pleased you enjoyed the imagery and satori of this haiku. Thank you for your kind review and comments, and I truly appreciate your lovely comments.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Leineco
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in darkest depths, their colors astound. . .I read somewhere that koi
are endangered because their ostentatious colors attract predators.
Perhaps these fathoms deep fishes are laughing with delight at their
freedom to wear rainbow fashions with exemption! :-)
Nicely done Indiana :-)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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in darkest depths, their colors astound. . .I read somewhere that koi
are endangered because their ostentatious colors attract predators.
Perhaps these fathoms deep fishes are laughing with delight at their
freedom to wear rainbow fashions with exemption! :-)
Nicely done Indiana :-)
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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I love your comment about the colorful fish life laughing due to their deep ocean habitat, Leineco. Thamk you for this kind review and for taking the time to share your thoughts. Truly appreciate your lovely response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
