Happy Day with Greyson
Another very good day babysitting.17 total reviews
Comment from barkingdog
Isn't that just wonderful. Deer grazing so close to the house and Greyson got to see them.
Plural of deer is still deer. You had deers in your story.
Of course, he's a little spoiled because he's a lot loved. haha
Little ones should have enough to do so that their minds are kept active. Toys are their work. They make his exercise his brain, fingers too. Eye-hand co-ordination is so important prior to going to school.
One typo:
-Greyson is really excited that something is coming up for him with more presenrts. (presents)
Best wishes,
:) e
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Isn't that just wonderful. Deer grazing so close to the house and Greyson got to see them.
Plural of deer is still deer. You had deers in your story.
Of course, he's a little spoiled because he's a lot loved. haha
Little ones should have enough to do so that their minds are kept active. Toys are their work. They make his exercise his brain, fingers too. Eye-hand co-ordination is so important prior to going to school.
One typo:
-Greyson is really excited that something is coming up for him with more presenrts. (presents)
Best wishes,
:) e
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Thank you my friend for the great review and the help! May God bless you today! Teri
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Puzzles are fun and they have them for all ages.
Comment from heyjude
Teri, it is always nice to read your posts about your time with Greyson. You talk a lot about God, too, and the things He's blessed you with that day. What a blessing you can help with Greyson.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Teri, it is always nice to read your posts about your time with Greyson. You talk a lot about God, too, and the things He's blessed you with that day. What a blessing you can help with Greyson.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much Judy! It is a great time and I have been truly blessed! May the Good Lord bless you today! Teri
Comment from MizKat
Hi Teresa,
You have written a very nice story about your grandson. I noticed a few mistakes that you made though, but I didn't know if I should tell you about them or not. I loved reading your poem about sweet little Greyson.
Kat
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Hi Teresa,
You have written a very nice story about your grandson. I noticed a few mistakes that you made though, but I didn't know if I should tell you about them or not. I loved reading your poem about sweet little Greyson.
Kat
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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lol Thank you Kat. You can always tell me about any mistakes I make. I am so far from perfect and I know I mess up. Thank you my friend. May the Good Lord bless you today! Teri
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Thanks. I hope if you see mistakes in my poetry that you will tell me about them too. Kat
Comment from royowen
Don't be anxious for Greyson finding Jesus, he'll see Him standing in front of him everyday when he sees you. And my children are musicians, (like me) my elder child is a performing artist, has a music degree, my younger child plays 2 instruments, apart from the 3mth old, all my grands, are incredibly talented already, my eldest has played piano in Carnegie hall, (a junior performance) Don't worry, we are all Jesus' witnesses, He takes care of business. What a Saviour! Well done. Teri, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Don't be anxious for Greyson finding Jesus, he'll see Him standing in front of him everyday when he sees you. And my children are musicians, (like me) my elder child is a performing artist, has a music degree, my younger child plays 2 instruments, apart from the 3mth old, all my grands, are incredibly talented already, my eldest has played piano in Carnegie hall, (a junior performance) Don't worry, we are all Jesus' witnesses, He takes care of business. What a Saviour! Well done. Teri, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you Roy for always encouraging me. You will never know how much I appreciate it and need it! May God bless you and Elaine abundantly my friend! Teri
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Thank you, you too Teri,
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Have a blessed day!
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You too,
Comment from sandy montgomery
This really blessed me. I just love hearing about you and your family. Sometimes it makes me cry a little like it did today because of my own situation but thats okay. I just love the sweetness you express. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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This really blessed me. I just love hearing about you and your family. Sometimes it makes me cry a little like it did today because of my own situation but thats okay. I just love the sweetness you express. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you Sandy. Just know that I love you my friend and I do care about you too. I cried when I read some of your work. Just hang in there my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment from lyenochka
Indeed it is such a blessing to have this time with Greyson and pour into his life with all that you know of the Lord. Wonderful that he can sing on key at his young age. I saw one typo where you have "presenrts" instead of "presents." Other than that, it's a nice recounting of a blessed time.
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Indeed it is such a blessing to have this time with Greyson and pour into his life with all that you know of the Lord. Wonderful that he can sing on key at his young age. I saw one typo where you have "presenrts" instead of "presents." Other than that, it's a nice recounting of a blessed time.
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you my friend for the great review! May God bless you! Teri
Comment from Sixty70
Greyson sounds like a wonderful grandson. I have a grandson with the same name, only spelled Grayson. What a small world! You write about Greyson with a view to the future. It's clear you have hopes for him, for his singing, his Faith, and his relationship with you and his grandfather.
As I read this, I imagine you have some great stories about Greyson. For example, one of my favorite stories about my Grayson is the time he told us he wanted to drive 'big machines' when he grew up. His grandfather took him to the barn to show him the front loader, asking him if he wanted to sit on the seat. Grayson replied, "No grandpa. You do it."
Telling stories by creating scenes will strengthen your storytelling. Best to you!
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Greyson sounds like a wonderful grandson. I have a grandson with the same name, only spelled Grayson. What a small world! You write about Greyson with a view to the future. It's clear you have hopes for him, for his singing, his Faith, and his relationship with you and his grandfather.
As I read this, I imagine you have some great stories about Greyson. For example, one of my favorite stories about my Grayson is the time he told us he wanted to drive 'big machines' when he grew up. His grandfather took him to the barn to show him the front loader, asking him if he wanted to sit on the seat. Grayson replied, "No grandpa. You do it."
Telling stories by creating scenes will strengthen your storytelling. Best to you!
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for the very nice review. It is a true blessing from God to have grandchildren. Blessings, Teri
