Cold As Stone
picture this challenge 1-16-1720 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow what a different take on the picture. I thought you were going to go with God giving her His hand to bring her back into the life with His guidance. Quite different and yet it did really fit.
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Wow what a different take on the picture. I thought you were going to go with God giving her His hand to bring her back into the life with His guidance. Quite different and yet it did really fit.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Barb. This was a difficult write for me as I don't do well with writing about the pictures.
Comment from misscookie
Wow!
This was great
Your words express the love her had for this lady
which was very sad he had to leave her.
For others to embrace her loveliness.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Wow!
This was great
Your words express the love her had for this lady
which was very sad he had to leave her.
For others to embrace her loveliness.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Cookie. This was a difficult write for me as I don't do well with writing about the pictures.
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You're very welcome, and you did a great job. keep on writing them, have a nice day.
Cookie
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A very sad poem about this lady of stone and I think your poem refers to many who have given up on life and settled for less than they planned for, a thought provoking write, love Dolly x
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A very sad poem about this lady of stone and I think your poem refers to many who have given up on life and settled for less than they planned for, a thought provoking write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Dolly.. This was a difficult write for me as I don't do well with writing about the pictures.
Comment from aryr
A very interesting poem regarding the picture, I liked the idea that you used that she might have been real but yet was not. It was not only interesting to read but it had a comfortable reading flow. Very well done, thanks.
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A very interesting poem regarding the picture, I liked the idea that you used that she might have been real but yet was not. It was not only interesting to read but it had a comfortable reading flow. Very well done, thanks.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, aryr. This was a difficult write for me as I don't do well with writing about the pictures.
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Well Patricia you did a fine job with this picture and you are so welcome.
Comment from BeasPeas
Your post for Picture This is well presented in the shape form and well expressed. Your last few words, "she never had a life," point out to me that some don't dare to risk and therefore miss out. Marilyn
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Your post for Picture This is well presented in the shape form and well expressed. Your last few words, "she never had a life," point out to me that some don't dare to risk and therefore miss out. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Marilyn. This was a difficult write for me as I don't do well with writing about the pictures.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Patricia,
You have written a very nice poem that was interesting to read.
I thought the poem of others always showed the lady sitting there.
I wish I had it to send to you as your poem would go very well with the picture.
Kat
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Hi Patricia,
You have written a very nice poem that was interesting to read.
I thought the poem of others always showed the lady sitting there.
I wish I had it to send to you as your poem would go very well with the picture.
Kat
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Kat. This was a difficult write for me as I don't do well with writing about the pictures.
Comment from winnona
A well-written picture this challenge. Your words flowed well line to line forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge very well.
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A well-written picture this challenge. Your words flowed well line to line forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge very well.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Winnona. This was a difficult write for me as I don't do well with writing about the pictures.
Comment from Sasha
Your descriptions are so vivid, you opaint a picture we can actually see. Lovely work with this one. I enjoyed it very much. It is a marvelous entry for this challenge. I found only one nit:
her ic cold ..you need to add 'e' to ic...
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Your descriptions are so vivid, you opaint a picture we can actually see. Lovely work with this one. I enjoyed it very much. It is a marvelous entry for this challenge. I found only one nit:
her ic cold ..you need to add 'e' to ic...
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Sasha. This was a difficult write for me as I don't do well with writing about the pictures.
Comment from heyjude
Patricia, a very good one for this picture challenge. I just tried to
forward the picture to you. I hope you get it and can post it. I
couldn't think of something I wanted to post with it this time. You
did a good job though
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Patricia, a very good one for this picture challenge. I just tried to
forward the picture to you. I hope you get it and can post it. I
couldn't think of something I wanted to post with it this time. You
did a good job though
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Judy. This was a difficult write for me as I don't do well with writing about the pictures.
Comment from DonandVicki
A poem that reads very smoothly and doesn't seem forced as so many do. I like the imagery that your words bring forth. Well done.
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A poem that reads very smoothly and doesn't seem forced as so many do. I like the imagery that your words bring forth. Well done.
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Don and Vicki. This was a difficult write for me as I don't do well with writing about the pictures.
