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A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I remember seeing the picture. This is not one of the best I have read from you but it does do the haiku challenge with the aaaahhhh line following and bringing it all together

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
    Thank you, Barb, for your review. I agree. It is not one of my best, but I will keep writing them to get better. Thanks.