Memory
Poem 3/5/33 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I like your interesting, well-written poem. It flows well with a good message about fading memory and I like your artwork choice.
angel123
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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I like your interesting, well-written poem. It flows well with a good message about fading memory and I like your artwork choice.
angel123
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading and the critique zanya
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, I like your 3/5/3 poem. You did a good job with the syllable count. The presentation is stunning. The words are a bit confusing to me. I like it though. Good job.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Hello, I like your 3/5/3 poem. You did a good job with the syllable count. The presentation is stunning. The words are a bit confusing to me. I like it though. Good job.
Gypsy
Comment Written 17-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the accolade zanya
Comment from rspoet
This is an interesting entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 3-5-3
Good comparison of removing waste
and decluttering the memory
but I'm not sure how many readers will understand
Excellent picture to match poem
Best wishes in the contest
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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This is an interesting entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 3-5-3
Good comparison of removing waste
and decluttering the memory
but I'm not sure how many readers will understand
Excellent picture to match poem
Best wishes in the contest
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading and the critique zanya
