Stone Woman
Picture This Challenge26 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Teri What a wondeful creative piece for this image I enjoyed how your story unfolded and your words were engaging and kept me there. I liked this very much Cheers Christine
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Hi Teri What a wondeful creative piece for this image I enjoyed how your story unfolded and your words were engaging and kept me there. I liked this very much Cheers Christine
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much Christine for the great review! Blessings, Teri
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Hi Teri, this is a good interpretation of the picture challenge. I enjoyed the story within this poem. It speaks loud on giving someone the benefit of the doubt and giving them the time of day. If I were to make any suggestion, it would be in the very last line. Perhaps try and rhyme the end word in the last line with the end word of the line before it as 'kill' and 'go' seemed to stop the flow to end it abruptly.
Thank you for sharing. ~DD
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Hi Teri, this is a good interpretation of the picture challenge. I enjoyed the story within this poem. It speaks loud on giving someone the benefit of the doubt and giving them the time of day. If I were to make any suggestion, it would be in the very last line. Perhaps try and rhyme the end word in the last line with the end word of the line before it as 'kill' and 'go' seemed to stop the flow to end it abruptly.
Thank you for sharing. ~DD
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the great review! Blessings, Teri
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My pleasure Teri. I hope you enjoy my Picture Challenge poem. Warm regards ~DD
Comment from sandy montgomery
So glad to see your work here. Good take on the challenge. Reminds me of a song line "Your heart of stone, I will remove. A heart of flesh that beats inside of you" great song by the late Rich Mullins. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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So glad to see your work here. Good take on the challenge. Reminds me of a song line "Your heart of stone, I will remove. A heart of flesh that beats inside of you" great song by the late Rich Mullins. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for the great review! Blessings, Teri
Comment from BeasPeas
A well rhymed poem of salvation of spirit. Those who cannot see the goodness around them need some help to recognize it. Your last stanza has a good message. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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A well rhymed poem of salvation of spirit. Those who cannot see the goodness around them need some help to recognize it. Your last stanza has a good message. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much Marilyn for the great review! Blessings, Teri
Comment from lyenochka
Such a lovely poem for this writing prompt! I like how you described the situation and the compassion that grew in the poet. Good use of font types from bold to normal to show the communication from the Lord and the obedient response!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Such a lovely poem for this writing prompt! I like how you described the situation and the compassion that grew in the poet. Good use of font types from bold to normal to show the communication from the Lord and the obedient response!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for the great review! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written my friend and reads smoothly with good rhymes through the poem you have done well inspired by this picture regards Jill
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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This is very well written my friend and reads smoothly with good rhymes through the poem you have done well inspired by this picture regards Jill
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much Jill for the great review! Blessings, Teri
Comment from damommy
Did she turn to stone because of her lack of belief? Like Lot's wife?
Very good take on this challenge.
I would have known it was yours without seeing your name. 8-)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Did she turn to stone because of her lack of belief? Like Lot's wife?
Very good take on this challenge.
I would have known it was yours without seeing your name. 8-)
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you my friend. I guess you can say she was like Lot's wife even though to be honest I didn't realize that! Blessings, TEri
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What a wonderful comparison to todays need. Without His love, we turn to stone, with hearts that are rughless and uncaring. Now is the time to take that soul and tell it of redemption,.
Very well done
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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What a wonderful comparison to todays need. Without His love, we turn to stone, with hearts that are rughless and uncaring. Now is the time to take that soul and tell it of redemption,.
Very well done
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much Barb! Blessings, Teri
Comment from DR DIP
This is the second picture this challenge I have read this morning. I love the different interpretation gained from the same photo. I really love your interpretation as well thank you for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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This is the second picture this challenge I have read this morning. I love the different interpretation gained from the same photo. I really love your interpretation as well thank you for sharing
dip
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment from MizKat
Hi Teresa,
I've read a few of these poem that others put up which were nice.
But I have to say that I liked yours the best by bringing God into it.
I'm sure the lady, that the poem was about, was happy to hear it too.
Kat
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Hi Teresa,
I've read a few of these poem that others put up which were nice.
But I have to say that I liked yours the best by bringing God into it.
I'm sure the lady, that the poem was about, was happy to hear it too.
Kat
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much my friend! I love to bring God into everything that I can~ He is really already in the middle of everything, we just have to acknowledge Him! Love, Teri
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It's the reason that I always write poems about God and Jesus. When I first started out at FS I'd write poems about other things. Kat
