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Stone Woman

Picture This Challenge

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Comment from MelB
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Hi Teri, I really enjoyed this interpretation of the Picture This challenge. Smooth rhyming and flow. He is a God of love.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
    Yes He is. He is all knowing and all powerful! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A geat message of faith in your words to those in need, Great rhymes and flow with a solution to our troubled lives, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much for the great review Dolly! May the Good Lord bless you today! Teri
Comment from patcelaw
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Teri, this is beautifully written with the heart of a Christian who cares. The idea of someone coming to the state of this lady makes the heart sad. Patricia

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much my friend for the great review! I hope you rest well tonight! love, Teri
Comment from royowen
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An excellent response to this 'picture this' prompt Teri! The words ring with compassion and sadness, the words are articulate and expressive, smoothly delivered, with aabb rhymed quatrains, you've interpreted the artwork well My friend, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much Roy! Blessings to you and Elaine as well! Teri
reply by royowen on 17-Jan-2017
    Thanks Teri, you and Tom too.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
    Did you know on Valentines day this year we will have been married for 30 years? Where has the time gone!
Comment from Bill Schott
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With this poem, Stone Woman, you have used the symbol of a statue to represent someone beaten down by life and who has become closed away to the world. Using this as an opportunity to speak of the Redeamer is clever and understandable. I read into the last line, that this moment outweighs any more need to rhyme.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much Bill! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Luna
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Teri, I'm so happy for you that you have found your Creator in your life.
That's absolutely awesome, and it shows in each poem that you write. This poem about the stone woman went together with the picture perfectly, making for an excellent presentation.

Good Job!! Thanks for sharing this with me.

Love 'n Light,

jeni

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much Jeni. I am so thankful to the Good Lord for showing me how happy I could really be! Have a blessed day my friend! love, Teri
Comment from c_lucas
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
    Thank you Charlie! May the Lord bless you! Teri
Comment from Ric Myworld
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This may very well be one of my favorite of your poems, yet. Although, I enjoy them all as I have an idea of the heart and character behind the words. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much Ric! Have a blessed night my friend! Teri
Comment from Irish Rain
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Beautiful spiritual poem about spreading the message of Christ. Aw, the poor stone lady seemed so hopeless, maybe now, her hope could be reborn. Blessings...

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much for the great review! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Leineco
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What an uplifting resolution to this picture you have penned!

Noting her predicament, and feeling deep sorrow for her aloneness,
you heard the voice of God telling you it was simply his word she
needed to be healed and whole again. :-)

Interesting and well presented interpretation Teri :-)

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much for the great review! Blessings, Teri