Picture This
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "She's Turned To Stone"poems from Picture This Challenge
39 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend and reads very well very creative inspired by the picture I enjoyed and very well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
Yes this is well written my friend and reads very well very creative inspired by the picture I enjoyed and very well done regards Jill
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, Jill. I'm glad you enjoyed my take on the picture. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This poem reaches your heart and takes your breath with powerful lines, and excellent vocabulary. Rhyme as always, was perfect.The message was inspired in the way you put it across, bringing it to a stunning crescendo, Brilliant. Kind regards Meia.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
This poem reaches your heart and takes your breath with powerful lines, and excellent vocabulary. Rhyme as always, was perfect.The message was inspired in the way you put it across, bringing it to a stunning crescendo, Brilliant. Kind regards Meia.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you for this lovely review, Meia. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my take on the picture. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I didn't see one of these types of poems last month. Glad to see them now. This is one of the better ones I've read about this picture. I like the way you see Mother Earth in the statue.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
I didn't see one of these types of poems last month. Glad to see them now. This is one of the better ones I've read about this picture. I like the way you see Mother Earth in the statue.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, Tom. I'm delighted you enjoyed my take on the picture. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Drew Delaney
A good story poem, Sandra. The first line in the second verse is a wee off in rhythm, I am thinking. But really, a nice poem for sure. Best wishes with this one.
Drew
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
A good story poem, Sandra. The first line in the second verse is a wee off in rhythm, I am thinking. But really, a nice poem for sure. Best wishes with this one.
Drew
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, Drew, for your lovely review. I'll take another look at that line, thank you for mentioning it. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
An excellent piece with a message everyone needs to hear. We took and took and someday there will be nothing to get back, she will be barren and unloved.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
An excellent piece with a message everyone needs to hear. We took and took and someday there will be nothing to get back, she will be barren and unloved.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, Barb, for this lovely review. It certainly looks that way, doesn't it. So sad. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Oh Sandra - I love this one. Great interpretation of the picture. You have maintained good heptameter throughout which is excellent. Great story. You have brought to the readers' notice the plight Mother Earth really is in. Lovely read. Warm regards Dorothy xxx
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
Oh Sandra - I love this one. Great interpretation of the picture. You have maintained good heptameter throughout which is excellent. Great story. You have brought to the readers' notice the plight Mother Earth really is in. Lovely read. Warm regards Dorothy xxx
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so very much, Dorothy, for your lovely review and the shiny 6 stars!! I'm so pleased you enjoyed my take on the picture. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Chrissy710
Wow Sandra A six with out a doubt What a great poem and this will be hard to top. I loved your theme of mother earth turning to stone because of mans pilliage Wonderful presentation and you certainly can write a good poem Sandra. An excellent poem for this image Well done and I am so glad to see you here again with poetry . Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
Wow Sandra A six with out a doubt What a great poem and this will be hard to top. I loved your theme of mother earth turning to stone because of mans pilliage Wonderful presentation and you certainly can write a good poem Sandra. An excellent poem for this image Well done and I am so glad to see you here again with poetry . Cheers Christine
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Aww, thank you, Christine, that is so nice of you. Thank you so much, for the 6 stars and wonderful review. I'm so pleased you liked my take on the picture. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Badger_29
I gave six because of your ability to take a current situation and see it to it's bitterest end. This title reminded me of a song by Electric Light Orchestra,
"Turning to Stone"
The symbolism portrayed here is very palpable, and as part native American, "Cherokee", this is a vivid portrayal of the worst case scenario. The image is profoundly appropriate, and your personification of earth mother is so moving that by the end, a shiver went up AND down my spine.
Blessings, Brother Badger
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
I gave six because of your ability to take a current situation and see it to it's bitterest end. This title reminded me of a song by Electric Light Orchestra,
"Turning to Stone"
The symbolism portrayed here is very palpable, and as part native American, "Cherokee", this is a vivid portrayal of the worst case scenario. The image is profoundly appropriate, and your personification of earth mother is so moving that by the end, a shiver went up AND down my spine.
Blessings, Brother Badger
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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What a wonderful review, Brother Badger, thank you so very much. And an extra big thank you and warm hug for the 6 stars!! You are very kind. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am sure God would be upset at what we have done to the Earth that we were to take of. I am also sure He's shaking his head at how we treat each other. I enjoyed reading your poem that needs to shouted from the rooftops.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
I am sure God would be upset at what we have done to the Earth that we were to take of. I am also sure He's shaking his head at how we treat each other. I enjoyed reading your poem that needs to shouted from the rooftops.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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I agree, Barbara, our beautiful planet is being slowly destroyed and for what? It makes you weep. Thank you, my friend for the lovely review. :) Sandra xx
Comment from William Ross
excellent, very nice, mother nature turned to stone because we raped the planet of everything there was to take. Great rhyme with a good meter, great job on the challenge. have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
excellent, very nice, mother nature turned to stone because we raped the planet of everything there was to take. Great rhyme with a good meter, great job on the challenge. have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much, William. I'm glad you liked my take on the picture, :) Sandra xx