When Friends Are Needed
a contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Linda Kay
What a pretty sight, this is a nice tribute to a cardinal and winter. You did a fine job with syllable count and bird topic of the prompt.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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What a pretty sight, this is a nice tribute to a cardinal and winter. You did a fine job with syllable count and bird topic of the prompt.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Linda, for your very kind praise.
Comment from BeasPeas
Your 5-7-5 is beautifully illustrated and the message is poetic and reminiscent of these striking birds at any time of year, but especially in winter. Nicely done. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Your 5-7-5 is beautifully illustrated and the message is poetic and reminiscent of these striking birds at any time of year, but especially in winter. Nicely done. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Marilyn. I am delighted you enjoyed this and appreciate your kind praise.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Lovely picture and a sweet sentiment at the heart of your 5-7-5 poem.
However, as with at least one other entry in this contest, I find no hint of the required wit, hence the missing star.
Steve
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Lovely picture and a sweet sentiment at the heart of your 5-7-5 poem.
However, as with at least one other entry in this contest, I find no hint of the required wit, hence the missing star.
Steve
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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You're right, Steve. I overlooked that key word when I read the prompt. Too late to fix, but muchas gracias for the heads-up and for taking the time to review.
Comment from NikolaiNoah
excellent poem, the artwork you chose was spot on with the poem. it feels so much fuller than a normal 5-7-5 poem. I am truly envious of your ability.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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excellent poem, the artwork you chose was spot on with the poem. it feels so much fuller than a normal 5-7-5 poem. I am truly envious of your ability.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind praise. I am especially flattered that you envy my skills I learned from writing, writing, writing more than five decades.
