Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. That is really something that the book you got years later was the one you read and loved the story from. That would be a real treasure to find.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017

Thanks for the review. My name was so carefully written and I remembered the joy of reading that book for the first time, Cheers, j

Comment from azwildrosa

Excellent

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That was cute! What a great story to tug at the heart and for sure a wonderful surprise. You have a strong entry for this prompt. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you in the booths.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017

Thanks for the encouraging review. It was a fun write, cheers, j

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

This is a very gentle and sweet story compared to some of the others.
Why do I do it? What can it be?
There's naughtiness in everyone, but twice as much in me!

That Peter Rabbit?

Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017

Only one Peter Rabbit, thanks for the review, cheers, j

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

It's such a shame this is a piece of fiction as it would make for a truly wonderful memory. Well written and a real surprise ending.

Very nice
GMG

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017

Thanks for the encouraging review. Cheers, j

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

Wow!
I bet you have some amazing late fees racked up.
That is definitely a surprise.
Nice entry to the contest.
Well written.
Michael

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017

Ha ha, imagine. Thanks for the review, cheers, j