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Comment from barkingdog
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You did promote this one, but you may be right about people reviewing you without promotion. I know that I have many who review my posts after they have expired.
I hope your forum does well.
When does it start?
I'll watch for it.
:) e

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
    Thank you for taking the time to read my writing and write a review.

    I have already posted the first three essays.

    That is why I decided I needed to post this particular message.

    I needed to let FanStorians, who I know have not seen them, because of the two Complimentary Reviews and your writing is no longer available to the general population rule, have an opportunity to know I am in case they were interested in the project.
reply by barkingdog on 15-Jan-2017
    I've been busy and have missed many posts. Not just yours.
    Yard work has kept me outside this time of year.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
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An interesting concept that will likely garner interesting feedback and posts. I'm not sure it shouldn't Judy be posted under the political common in the main forum.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
    Thank you for taking the time to read my writing for the review.

    I do not want it posted in the main forum of this site.

    That is why I chose to go this other route.

    And, you are correct, I am receiving very good, positive, comments about the three essays I have already posted, and this particular piece.

Comment from judiverse
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If we are fans, we'll already be notified when you post something. I don't see the reason you would need a special forum, "Breakfast with the Donald." Please, I would suggest that you don't make too much of how soon the reviews for your posts come in and your popularity. Some of us are sensitive because we have to work harder to get reviews. It will be interesting to hear how people are responding to Trump's first days in office, though. judi

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
    I appreciate you taking the time to read my posting and submit a review.

    All I can say is yes, I will proudly compliment my fans, and all the support they provide me, regardless of what anybody else thinks about that. They have the right to be complimented for all their support. It lets them know that their efforts are appreciated.

    It is also one of those little things that helps to build a much more positive relationship between a Writer and his readers.
reply by judiverse on 14-Jan-2017
    You're welcome. judi
Comment from Ulla
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Your idea is good, and I'm happy for you not having to promote it. I don't think that is quite the idea with fanstory. Some of us will have to earn some phony dollars to be able to promote our work. All best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
    I appreciate you taking the time to read my posting and submit s review.

    All I can say is that indeed it is a nice position to be in because not having to spend time promoting my work allows me to spend all my time writing, which I would much rather do, not chase "phony" dollars.
Comment from wondertwin
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This is a very clever and unique idea. I am new to F/S, but this is the first essay post I've seen of this nature. The broad base of F/S should keep this very interesting.
Side note in punctuation, I noticed an out of place exclamation point in the fourth paragraph after the word 'Donald'.
This should make for some flare in the writing :) Blessings, AJ

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
    That punctuation is actually not out of place.

    Since he owns his name "The Donald", the exclamation mark allows me to use his name in the title without violating his copyrights to the name.

    Appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from William Ross
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Donald trump what can one say in less than a book. i say we have to just wait and see, he may surprise us. he's crude, he rude, and can learn to calm down some. I'm holding off until at least after his first year in office. have a great day

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
    Thanks for taking the time to read my posting and writing a review.

    Trump is many things indeed including rude and crude.

    It will be very interesting to see what he actually does for the United States.
Comment from Heidi M
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Interesting idea. You should get a lot of response because usually anything associated with politics makes a hot topic.
Consider changing to this:
'Anyway, as I said above, I began' -Delete space between 'any' and 'way'; replace period with comma after 'above'

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
    Thanks for taking the time to read my posting and writing a review.

    I agreed with your suggestion and edited it.

    Now it does indeed read better.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This sounds like a marvelous opportunity for the politically inclined here. Congratulations on all your success both here and throughout the wide world of web. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
    Thank you for taking the time to read my posting and write a review.
Comment from mbroyles2
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I'm a fan, and I'm thrilled that you came back I think the forum is great. I'll admit that I'm not really a fan of The Donald, but I'm not a hater either.
I look forward to reading and commenting on more.
Michael

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
    Thanks for taking the time to read my posting and write a review.

Comment from MissMerri
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I'm glad to see you doing this, and look forward to reading your posts and other fan's comments. I hope your other writing ventures were successful. It is nice to have you back. As for this post, your message is clearly stated and well edited, and obviously needs no help from me. I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
    Thanks for taking the time to read my posting and writing a review.

    The response has been very positive from many FanStoians.