Comment from frogbook

Excellent

I didn't realize you were putting your people in a book. Great idea as they are always interesting and entertaining as this one is. Fun and funny, as well as quite clever.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017

Thanks, FB, for the nice review. I have a friend working on caricatures to go with them below publishing. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Well, I don't know how high they're going to get on those substances, but they will definitely avoid arrest and prosecution if they stick with those items. Heck, they just might spark a move to getting high while living a spicy life.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017

Thank you, nomi, for reading about these scuff-law Kansasians

Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

LOL You are SO funny Bill! I am going to HAVE to check out more of your poems.
Your riptofreeka and paprika rhymes my fave...as it launched the reader straight into this crazy read full of fun, fun, fun and how on EARTH you rhymed your endings shows a vivid and mischievous imagination in fine form.

Well done, dear Bill
You sure did done
Dem justice down in Kansas
You ding dang stuck it to dem all
So freekan choice dem hands is

Love your sense of humour. Gonna check out your port when I can. Cheers P

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017

Thank you, CPJ, for the wildly encouraging review. Bill

reply by closetpoetjester on 14-Jan-2017

LOL No probs. Although I can CLEARLY see you need NO encouragement haha

I can also SEE I'm going to have to fan you.

I checked out your port before and had a cackle at a couple of posts you had there. I'm trying to find a few more that write funnies. I don't like to read too much depressing stuff to be honest. I like to laugh.

Anyway, I'm back at FS more this year so look forward to following some that I haven't prior.
Cheers P

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

This is well written my friend and made me smile the way you create these characters very original I enjoyed well-done regards Jill

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017

Thank you, MRs. HP, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, hahahaha. I've said it before and I say it again. My, My. You just have a way with words. I love it. What will the police say, but of course they're smarter than them. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017

Thank you, Ulla, for the kind and encouraging review. Bill

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Yes, snorting that pap-rika and smoking that pars-o-ley...that's where they get all them there smarts from, ha ha. I love this...these are such a welcome delight!!! Blessings...

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017

Thank you, IR, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

I think you are smokin' the parsoley..too..Bill
And tell me..if you live in England..how do you know so much about KC?...
As usual...your poems are ridiculously funny...but this one may be a little off PC..
You will receive a warning from the Democrats ...

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017

Hi, Nika. I live in America. Michigan is that mitten-shaped state that waves to you from the middle of the Great Lakes. The democrats tolerate me pretty well here.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Love the rhymes and understand it apart from he last line? 'Matter dan da mans is?', can you explain it to me? The rythm and flow just perfect, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017

This line "they's 'marter dan da mans is". would translate to this ... "they are smarter than the cops are". That would, of course, be ironic humor since nothing they are doing is either illegal or provocative. They're just stupid. Thanks for the nice review. Bill

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 14-Jan-2017

Oh, I get it now! Silly me, The line is perfect! x

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Or, J.R. and T.T. only "think" they are smarter than "The Man" is, Bill.
Sometimes da' Man will give you juuuuuuuust enough rope to hang yourself with, LOL.
But snorting paprika!?!
Oh, hell no, heh-heh...

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017

Thanks for giving this a look, Dean.

reply by Dean Kuch on 14-Jan-2017

Sure thing, Bill. Anytime.
~Dean

Comment from damommy

Excellent

It's nice to read something that makes me laugh.

This is so cute with your creative way with words.

Do people really snort paprika and smoke parsley? I wouldn't be surprised.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017

Thank you, da, for the great review. Bill

reply by damommy on 13-Jan-2017

Always welcome.