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Thought You Would Have Known

free verse

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Comment from Selina Stambi
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Hello Luls, my friend,

It's been ages! Why do I always get the feeling, when I read your poetry, that I've pitched a tent to camp inside your head? :)

Very poignant. Very REAL. Well done, dear.

Happy New Year.

Hugs,

Sonali xx



adrenaline vers(u)s your reality .

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
    lol am I that transparent? lol Write what you feel, isn';t that so? How was your holidays? I read about your friend Sharon, in Maui, she's a real nice person, full of explosive writing. So glad her dreams are becoming a reality for her and that she is the main character in action for them.
    as always, thxs for the corrections, I've been missing that, probably have a past collection of in-need for corrections. lol
    Tamara will be home, with hubby Jan. 31 and a reception on Feb 4 at my sister's new home. she left her husband. yeah!! Can't bloody well wait.
    I'll catch you up with the new photos, promise

    lulube
reply by Selina Stambi on 20-Jan-2017
    I'm thrilled for you that Tamara's coming home. I bet you're counting the days. Sorry to hear that sis' marriage is done. Life is tough. Have a great weekend, doll. Hugs xx
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    I'd end a marriage like that as well. she bought a 37 acres horse ranch 6 months after they split. lol
    Oh ya, counting and talking more than ever to her on the phone. lol They will be on a tight schedule here so I won't see too much of her, but just that first hug at the airport will tie me over for awhile. lol

    lulube
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    Oh ya, forgot to tell you, started the year off with???? a Duck fun poem, lol now referring to it as a Duck fun and friends poem, cause they were swans in the photo and some got confused as to why I referred to it as a Duck fun poem. lol there is one near the end of Dec. as well if you want a chuckle.

    lulube
Comment from country ranch writer
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SOME ARE TO PROUD TO ADMIT THEY ARE WRONG AND SOME JUST DON'T KNOW HOW TO LET GO AND MOVE ON. THOUGHT HE WOULD HAVE LEARNED BY NOW

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
    well I seem to get mixed up with slow learners. lol hoping all is well and getting better?

    lulube
reply by country ranch writer on 14-Jan-2017
    our fingers crossed for this Tuesday okay
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
    So how did Tuesday go Barb

    lulube
reply by country ranch writer on 20-Jan-2017
    He got released
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    He got released? so everything went okay? or a matter of funds? hope not the latter.

    lulube
reply by country ranch writer on 23-Jan-2017
    So far it is staying healed.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
    great news, great news.

    lulube
reply by country ranch writer on 23-Jan-2017
    SMILES
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this heartfelt poem. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
    thxs again for stopping in and for your awesome comments

    lulube glad you enjoyed it
Comment from winnona
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A well-written poem. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your artwork and background color completed the piece well.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
    thxs so much for this awesome review. So glad you liked it.\

    lulube