Comment from Cranial Thinker

Exceptional

Ha!!!! the flight of all flights and the truest restfulness one can ever know igniting the wings of searchable understanding to the solidness of the original winds of true breath's which holds all living things in their perspective phylum's in accordance to their designed purpose of fostering the actualized planting of divine grow-able love that shall unify all intelligent progenies of clay to spiritual livable existence....A very deep writing my brother Darren....Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017

Thank you for your continued support, and for grasping the deeper, hidden meanings in between the lines. I really appreciate your perspective.
Darren

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

LOL - okay, I stand corrected. . .there are 8!

This one is my second favorite. I love the satori line
trailing trade winds home
in conjunction with the first line of the imagery portion
in one of my lives
it speaks to the many and varied journeys we take as
we travel through our existence :-)

nicely done :-)

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate your comments!
Darren

Comment from irishauthorme

Excellent

Maybe too deep for a majority of FS readers, who do not wish to contemplate anything beyond their present, mundane existence. Far Seers are few and far between, mostly maligned and misunderstood in their lifetimes. For some reason, Poets are notoriously celebrated only after their demise. perhaps it is only then that the critics can have their heyday with no redemption?
irish

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017

"Instant karmas gonna get you" John Lennon

reply by irishauthorme on 15-Jan-2017

Hey I really appreciate your writing! You really lay it out there, risking the criticism of short thinking, limited existence readers. I am short on time, long on years, of medium sage advice, but this I know: "Keep on writing!"
irish

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Although out of focus it is the perfect picture for your words Badger. I always wondered what it would be like to be a bird in flight it would be good to have two lives and make one as a bird just to experience the joy of flight

dip

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017

Thanks again for your continued support.
Darren

Comment from winnona

Excellent

Beautifully written haiku. I think you have captured the spirit and feeling that is meant to be written as a haiku. I think all of us have a different idea of what poetry is. To me, it is to capture the essence and feeling of what we are writing about.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017

Thank you so much, I find your comments encouraging .
Blessings,
Brother Badger

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

A Wonderful example of a well-done air challenge haiku. You utilized the wind in a proper manner. In combination with bird, wind is a clear kigo.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017

Thank you, Gypsy. As a teacher, I cherish your comments.
Darren

Comment from wondertwin

Excellent

Nicely written haiku on birds. I liked this one as much as I liked your hummingbird haiku. Both excellently executed! Blessings, AJ

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate your comments!
Brother Badger

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Badger, I like the picture you have painted in the mind of this reader with this lovely haiku, and the photo is just right. May your weekend be blessed. Patricia

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Blessings,
Brother Badger