My cancer a couple of years ago.
Funny poem (free verse) about a serious matter.9 total reviews
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your artwork and background color completed the piece well.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your artwork and background color completed the piece well.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
It is a serious situation as I know from personal experience, yet you have managed to make light of it which does actually go along way to promote healing. This is a well penned free verse that expresses the whole experience nicely. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
It is a serious situation as I know from personal experience, yet you have managed to make light of it which does actually go along way to promote healing. This is a well penned free verse that expresses the whole experience nicely. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thanks for you kind review. Have a blessed and lovely weekend.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
My sister had cancer of the esophagus. It didn't turn out well for her. I hope you have a better experience. It's not the best diet plan I can think of.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
My sister had cancer of the esophagus. It didn't turn out well for her. I hope you have a better experience. It's not the best diet plan I can think of.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thanks for you kind review. Have a blessed and lovely weekend.
Comment from Irish Rain
Amen that you were saved, to tell your tale. So glad the doctor refused euthanasia...although I do understand some people wanting this... this is an excellent entry in this contest, blessings...
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
Amen that you were saved, to tell your tale. So glad the doctor refused euthanasia...although I do understand some people wanting this... this is an excellent entry in this contest, blessings...
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thanks for you kind review. Have a blessed and lovely weekend.
Comment from Nelle Louise
such a serious matter. So sad. Definitely not a good weight loss plan. I hope you are on the mend and living a healthier lifestyle. Nellie Louise
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
such a serious matter. So sad. Definitely not a good weight loss plan. I hope you are on the mend and living a healthier lifestyle. Nellie Louise
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thanks, you are not so kind
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
HAHA, that goal I have achieved.
And beautiful scars all over my body.......
I am speechless, the depth of emotion and the almost matter-of-fact way you tell it makes this more than amazing survival story. I had a cancer scare and large tumour removed, and many scars from various ops...cannot compare to your pain but this beautiful work has come from the ashes of your pain and it is beautiful and resonates strongly. Well done it is magnificent. Kindest regards, Meia.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
HAHA, that goal I have achieved.
And beautiful scars all over my body.......
I am speechless, the depth of emotion and the almost matter-of-fact way you tell it makes this more than amazing survival story. I had a cancer scare and large tumour removed, and many scars from various ops...cannot compare to your pain but this beautiful work has come from the ashes of your pain and it is beautiful and resonates strongly. Well done it is magnificent. Kindest regards, Meia.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thanks for you kind review. Have a blessed and lovely weekend.
Comment from marinadawn
Its good to have a positive attitude in all situation , it does not minimize the situation but it strengthens you to face the situation, and its good that the internet allows us to find information and appropriate health services
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
Its good to have a positive attitude in all situation , it does not minimize the situation but it strengthens you to face the situation, and its good that the internet allows us to find information and appropriate health services
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thanks for you kind review. Have a blessed and lovely weekend.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh wow, I hope you're better now!
You definitely met the criteria for the writing prompt: You took a serious subject and gave a lighthearted touch to it.
Good luck in the contest, and with your health!
Rhonda
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
Oh wow, I hope you're better now!
You definitely met the criteria for the writing prompt: You took a serious subject and gave a lighthearted touch to it.
Good luck in the contest, and with your health!
Rhonda
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and good weekend. Yes, I am somewhat better.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A heartfelt story told with some humour. I sincerely hope your surgery and therapy is a complete success as these days miracles happen everyday, thanks for sharing this poem with us, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
A heartfelt story told with some humour. I sincerely hope your surgery and therapy is a complete success as these days miracles happen everyday, thanks for sharing this poem with us, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and good weekend.