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Poem ABC3 total reviews
Comment from Franklin Price
A very thought provoking poem. We are definitely on the verge of a shifting future.
We cannot and should not sit back and expect good things to happen without being involved. If we help, it will be awesome. Well done and well presented.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
A very thought provoking poem. We are definitely on the verge of a shifting future.
We cannot and should not sit back and expect good things to happen without being involved. If we help, it will be awesome. Well done and well presented.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading and the critique zanya
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my pleasure
Comment from Hayley Solomon
Good ABC poem, you have met requirements well.
I agree with your political senttiments - certainly fear is fermenting!
Like your geosocial analogy.
Well done
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
Good ABC poem, you have met requirements well.
I agree with your political senttiments - certainly fear is fermenting!
Like your geosocial analogy.
Well done
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written ABC poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording that made a lot of sense and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
This is a very well written ABC poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording that made a lot of sense and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya