Comment from loismddavis

Excellent

I am giving you a good grade because I like perfect Haiku which you have accomplished. A very peculiar poem and indeed ironic--I am so happy to find someone who knows some poetic elements. good job

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Thanks Lois, I appreciate your honest comments!
Brother Badger

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This horror haiku, Birdbrain, uses its seventeen syllables to make a funny scene out of what might be a corpse getting its brains picked out by a passing bird.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017

Thanks Bill, I knew that you would be humorously disturbed.
I really appreciate your comments.
Brother Badger