Anger and Rattlesnakes
A bit of wisdom (free verse)15 total reviews
Comment from MelB
I wrote a poem about this same thing. Anger and unforgiveness are the number one way the devil gets into our lives. It also makes you pretty darn unhappy. Good example with the picture!
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I wrote a poem about this same thing. Anger and unforgiveness are the number one way the devil gets into our lives. It also makes you pretty darn unhappy. Good example with the picture!
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Thanks for the nice review, Melissa.
Comment from mbroyles2
A great comparison to drive your message home. A clear point is made about holding on to anger with an image that is easy to relate to.
Excellent job!
Michael
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A great comparison to drive your message home. A clear point is made about holding on to anger with an image that is easy to relate to.
Excellent job!
Michael
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Thanks for the nice review, Michael.
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Anger and Rattlesnakes, has a great object lesson which should well remain in print and not acted out. You could be cautious and carry a garter snake.
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This free verse, Anger and Rattlesnakes, has a great object lesson which should well remain in print and not acted out. You could be cautious and carry a garter snake.
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Thanks for the nice review, Bill.
Comment from winnona
a well-written poem with a very good message. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Well done.
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a well-written poem with a very good message. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Well done.
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Thanks for the nice review, Winnona.
Comment from William Ross
So true Pat we must not hold onto anger it only makes us bitter,nice job on the poem and the message. thanks for the share and have a great day
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So true Pat we must not hold onto anger it only makes us bitter,nice job on the poem and the message. thanks for the share and have a great day
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Thanks for the nice review, William.
