Anger and Rattlesnakes
A bit of wisdom (free verse)15 total reviews
Comment from Treischel
I think that the pucture makes a oerfect accompanyment to your Free Verse message about anger. The rattlesnake as pet makes an excellent metaphor. Good advice.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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I think that the pucture makes a oerfect accompanyment to your Free Verse message about anger. The rattlesnake as pet makes an excellent metaphor. Good advice.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Tom.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Hey, that is a great analogy, Patricia. I'm going to try and remember these wise words whenever I feel anger rise about something that happened in the past! It makes perfect sense what you say!
Well done!
Have a great day, Patricia!
Connie
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Hey, that is a great analogy, Patricia. I'm going to try and remember these wise words whenever I feel anger rise about something that happened in the past! It makes perfect sense what you say!
Well done!
Have a great day, Patricia!
Connie
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Because my eyes are giving me problems, this is a copy and paste to say I thank all so much for their lovely reviews. As soon as my eyes get better, hopefully I can stay caught up on the reviews and the thanks to all your reviews.
Comment from Joan E.
That is one angry-looking snake! Thank you for sharing your soul-felt allegory. Your wisdom from life's experiences is always appreciated. Sweet dreams- Joan
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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That is one angry-looking snake! Thank you for sharing your soul-felt allegory. Your wisdom from life's experiences is always appreciated. Sweet dreams- Joan
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Because my eyes are giving me problems, this is a copy and paste to say I thank all so much for their lovely reviews. As soon as my eyes get better, hopefully I can stay caught up on the reviews and the thanks to all your reviews.
Comment from BeasPeas
In some ways I agree, anger is detrimental and we must find a way to dissipate it or it will destroy, that's true. But people who continually hurt others have an agenda, are toxic, and we must release them, let them go and pray for healing for them and for us. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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In some ways I agree, anger is detrimental and we must find a way to dissipate it or it will destroy, that's true. But people who continually hurt others have an agenda, are toxic, and we must release them, let them go and pray for healing for them and for us. Marilyn
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Because my eyes are giving me problems, this is a copy and paste to say I thank all so much for their lovely reviews. As soon as my eyes get better, hopefully I can stay caught up on the reviews and the thanks to all your reviews.
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Hi Patricia. I hope your vision will be back to normal soon. :) Marilyn
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
The picture makes perfect sense to go with the piece. Anger only makes one simple minded with one thought in mind...getting back.
Very well done and great advice
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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The picture makes perfect sense to go with the piece. Anger only makes one simple minded with one thought in mind...getting back.
Very well done and great advice
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Because my eyes are giving me problems, this is a copy and paste to say I thank all so much for their lovely reviews. As soon as my eyes get better, hopefully I can stay caught up on the reviews and the thanks to all your reviews.
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting analogy. I never thought of comparing anger to rattlesnakes. I think that is a wise saying that holding on to anger can cause ourselves hurt as well as to others.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Interesting analogy. I never thought of comparing anger to rattlesnakes. I think that is a wise saying that holding on to anger can cause ourselves hurt as well as to others.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Because my eyes are giving me problems, this is a copy and paste to say I thank all so much for their lovely reviews. As soon as my eyes get better, hopefully I can stay caught up on the reviews and the thanks to all your reviews.
Comment from Teri7
Well you did make a strong point but do not like snake pictures at all. They make me itch! lol Very good wording and good advice! Good job! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Well you did make a strong point but do not like snake pictures at all. They make me itch! lol Very good wording and good advice! Good job! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Because my eyes are giving me problems, this is a copy and paste to say I thank all so much for their lovely reviews. As soon as my eyes get better, hopefully I can stay caught up on the reviews and the thanks to all your reviews.
Comment from heyjude
Patricia, a very good one on anger. I just wrote one on anger today,
too. I'm doing a lesson with women at the prison in a couple of weeks
and it's about anger. I like your comparison of picking up the
rattlesnake and holding on to anger.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Patricia, a very good one on anger. I just wrote one on anger today,
too. I'm doing a lesson with women at the prison in a couple of weeks
and it's about anger. I like your comparison of picking up the
rattlesnake and holding on to anger.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the nice review, Judy. I am so far behind as I had a lost day yesterday because of my eyes being dilated.
Comment from Sasha
I agree with this completely. Holding onto anger is insane as well as unhealthy. I, like you, did this for years and only recently let it go by forgiving those that had caused my anger. It was as though a heavy weight had been lifted off my shoulders. Great work with this one. Strong and important message too.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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I agree with this completely. Holding onto anger is insane as well as unhealthy. I, like you, did this for years and only recently let it go by forgiving those that had caused my anger. It was as though a heavy weight had been lifted off my shoulders. Great work with this one. Strong and important message too.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the nice review, Sasha, I am behind because I had to have my eye dilated yesterday.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Patricia,
Thanks again for writing such a nice poem that held my interest.
It's so sad when people hold onto their anger as it doesn't help at all.
Instead of always being angry they should stop and start talking to God.
Kat
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Hi Patricia,
Thanks again for writing such a nice poem that held my interest.
It's so sad when people hold onto their anger as it doesn't help at all.
Instead of always being angry they should stop and start talking to God.
Kat
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the nice review, Kat.
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Again thanks. Kat
