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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Scene at a Gift Shop"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
14 total reviews
Comment from royowen
An excellent script here Bill, I love the way you've "mashed" the language, giving an hilarious slant to the conversation between the slightly more articulate Pons opposed to Ned. Well done, an excellent script my friend, very funny, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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An excellent script here Bill, I love the way you've "mashed" the language, giving an hilarious slant to the conversation between the slightly more articulate Pons opposed to Ned. Well done, an excellent script my friend, very funny, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Roy.
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Welcome Bill,
Comment from George Jr
Great comedic writing. I enjoyed the entire scene. I could feel the slight sense of annoyance Pons must have felt. great character definition. Thank you for writing this. I look forward to more.
-peace
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Great comedic writing. I enjoyed the entire scene. I could feel the slight sense of annoyance Pons must have felt. great character definition. Thank you for writing this. I look forward to more.
-peace
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Thanks, GJ, for the great review. Bill
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Thank you for writing it!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Bill,
I love pieces which play on words and this piece does it very well indeed. Excellent use of alternative spelling and pronunciation to put it across.
Good fun piece
G
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Hi Bill,
I love pieces which play on words and this piece does it very well indeed. Excellent use of alternative spelling and pronunciation to put it across.
Good fun piece
G
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2017
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Thanks, G, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Though the use of language, dialect and humour, you have create a fantastic piece of work. So amazing I really love your way with words, it's terrific and a refreshing change to read. well done kindest regards Meia :)
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Though the use of language, dialect and humour, you have create a fantastic piece of work. So amazing I really love your way with words, it's terrific and a refreshing change to read. well done kindest regards Meia :)
Comment Written 14-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Meia, for the very nice review. Bill
Comment from William Ross
hahaha, I like the play on words here in this little script like sick-ifficant other as well as others. A fun and humorous piece about valentines shopping. good luck on this and have a great day
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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hahaha, I like the play on words here in this little script like sick-ifficant other as well as others. A fun and humorous piece about valentines shopping. good luck on this and have a great day
Comment Written 14-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thank you, William, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from emptypage
LOL.
Okay. I'm not sure, but this sounds like an ongoing saga. Haven't I seen these two before?
In any case, I like 'em. The straight man and the funny 'un.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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LOL.
Okay. I'm not sure, but this sounds like an ongoing saga. Haven't I seen these two before?
In any case, I like 'em. The straight man and the funny 'un.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you, EP, for the nice review. I have a couple dozen of these scenes with Pons and Ned in my portfolio under SCRIPTS.
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I'll have to check them out.
Comment from Teri7
lol This is just too funny! You used very cute and good descriptive words and very good dialog. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it very much! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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lol This is just too funny! You used very cute and good descriptive words and very good dialog. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it very much! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Teri, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Ulla
Hahahahah, Bill, I love it. It is just so funny and your play on words is priceless. I do love these wee anecdotes of yours. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Hahahahah, Bill, I love it. It is just so funny and your play on words is priceless. I do love these wee anecdotes of yours. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Ulla, for the terrific review. Bill
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Reminds me of Lum and Abner or Homer and Jethro. Two idiots trying to make sense of each other. I love these characters. I also like the short interactions between them.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Reminds me of Lum and Abner or Homer and Jethro. Two idiots trying to make sense of each other. I love these characters. I also like the short interactions between them.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Thomas, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Oh, oh, oh. My head is about to burst with Ned's ignorance. I have know a person or two whose ignorance could match or equal Ned's. Believe me, I always made sure that our time together was kept to a minimum of minutes. Poor Pons. Ned is a load.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Oh, oh, oh. My head is about to burst with Ned's ignorance. I have know a person or two whose ignorance could match or equal Ned's. Believe me, I always made sure that our time together was kept to a minimum of minutes. Poor Pons. Ned is a load.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you, nomi. I try to make Ned as dumb as I can.
