Zeath The Messenger
A short story in regard to a troubling dream I had.4 total reviews
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. Very well done taking control of your dream with finger nail polish and Beatle music. You have definitely defeated the demon. As time goes on you will eventually make Zeath leave or turn him into an alley. Well -done!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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A well-written contest entry. Very well done taking control of your dream with finger nail polish and Beatle music. You have definitely defeated the demon. As time goes on you will eventually make Zeath leave or turn him into an alley. Well -done!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much. Yes, no Zeath in my dreams these days!
M. Sky
Comment from hvysmker
Way to go, he-he.
I find I can sometimes control my dreams, not always, but occasionally. Maybe halfway between dream and waking state. That ability can eliminate nightmares ... well, not horses or aardvarks, though. The horses still bite and stomp while the aardvarks giggle.
Charlie
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Way to go, he-he.
I find I can sometimes control my dreams, not always, but occasionally. Maybe halfway between dream and waking state. That ability can eliminate nightmares ... well, not horses or aardvarks, though. The horses still bite and stomp while the aardvarks giggle.
Charlie
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Thank you. I am having fun writing on FanStory.
M. Sky
Comment from loismddavis
A truly frightening dream which fulfills the requirements f the prompt. I do not know if this is true or imaginary but the heroine or your must have resolved the issue in her life for the dream to have disappeared. The animal in the dream was a symbol and not an actual animal,. One can resolve the problem if you tune into how you FELT about it.good job
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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A truly frightening dream which fulfills the requirements f the prompt. I do not know if this is true or imaginary but the heroine or your must have resolved the issue in her life for the dream to have disappeared. The animal in the dream was a symbol and not an actual animal,. One can resolve the problem if you tune into how you FELT about it.good job
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2017
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Thank you. This was written from my experience. Yes, you are right. I believe it was a symbol, too. All good now.
Maureen Sky
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I think you have a tendency to write overlong sentences and use some superfluous terms/words as a result. Things such as 'I speak of' and 'of sorts' don't add much to the piece. And this 'This thing, this creature, call it what you may'.
Its' face is very dark and its' stature - the possessive form of it is its with no apostrophe. An apostrophe is only used for a contraction with it.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Hi there,
I think you have a tendency to write overlong sentences and use some superfluous terms/words as a result. Things such as 'I speak of' and 'of sorts' don't add much to the piece. And this 'This thing, this creature, call it what you may'.
Its' face is very dark and its' stature - the possessive form of it is its with no apostrophe. An apostrophe is only used for a contraction with it.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Yes, thank you. I do get carried away and I need to pay more attention to punctuation. Thanks for the constructive criticism.
Always learning.
Thanks again.
Maureen Sky
