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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Stone Bird"Collection of haikus
4 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
archaeopteryx
an extinct primitive bird
only fossil now
Hello, Darren, :) arthae.... what? LoL what an unique bird choice and the second one for this challenge. Awesome! The more the better.
Good job, my friend
gypsy
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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archaeopteryx
an extinct primitive bird
only fossil now
Hello, Darren, :) arthae.... what? LoL what an unique bird choice and the second one for this challenge. Awesome! The more the better.
Good job, my friend
gypsy
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments.
Brother Badger
Comment from mermaids
Excellent use of words about a bird that lived in the past. Excellent theme for a poem, not many poems about creatures who lived in the past. Great line "only fossil now'. It is so true.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Excellent use of words about a bird that lived in the past. Excellent theme for a poem, not many poems about creatures who lived in the past. Great line "only fossil now'. It is so true.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
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Thanks mermaids, I really appreciate your comments.
Darren
Comment from DionysusDeVille
This can actually be taken on many different levels including being a portrait of people's dreams. Some people fly and soar and then sometimes those dreams become frozen in time
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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This can actually be taken on many different levels including being a portrait of people's dreams. Some people fly and soar and then sometimes those dreams become frozen in time
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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I absolutely LOVE your perspective, it helps me see my work and understand it better from a different viewpoint,. Thank-you very much; I am enlightened ~
Brother Badger ~
Comment from DR DIP
hmmm another haiku great photo I wonder if that was reproduced from skeletal bones in knowing what it looked like?
anyways your three lines say it all. I have decided I am not going to review many haikus any more as I got blasted for not giving enough positives in my reviews with haikus. TO be honest Badger and I am being brutally honest because I respect you as a poet I just cannot see the skill factor in a haiku I know dean and gypsy rose a huge exponents and I am sure many people see these in a different light. but that's just my opinion and in the scheme of things means diddy squat
respectfully dip
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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hmmm another haiku great photo I wonder if that was reproduced from skeletal bones in knowing what it looked like?
anyways your three lines say it all. I have decided I am not going to review many haikus any more as I got blasted for not giving enough positives in my reviews with haikus. TO be honest Badger and I am being brutally honest because I respect you as a poet I just cannot see the skill factor in a haiku I know dean and gypsy rose a huge exponents and I am sure many people see these in a different light. but that's just my opinion and in the scheme of things means diddy squat
respectfully dip
Comment Written 11-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2017
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You are certainly entitled to your opinion, and I for one do not find any problem with your viewpoint. I sincerely appreciate ALL of your reviews, and haikus are not for everyone. I enjoy the weekly challenge; it keeps me writing and thinking, and doing interesting research!
Brother Badger < : - D ~
