Beware
Words are not always just words..17 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a wonderful entry. The line and syllable count are spot on. The message is powerfully delivered and express a universal truth beautifully. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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This is a wonderful entry. The line and syllable count are spot on. The message is powerfully delivered and express a universal truth beautifully. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much!! Very much appreciated!!! :)
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My pleasure.
Comment from heyjude
J, powerful 2 4 2 for the contest. We certainly do need to beware of what we say. Our words are hurtful or they can be helpful. We don't want.to scar others lives
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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J, powerful 2 4 2 for the contest. We certainly do need to beware of what we say. Our words are hurtful or they can be helpful. We don't want.to scar others lives
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Thank you SO MUCH!!! :) <3
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi JP - How true are your words! Sometimes scars heal more quickly than the spoken words, which cannot be taken back. Good message in so few words - well done. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Hi JP - How true are your words! Sometimes scars heal more quickly than the spoken words, which cannot be taken back. Good message in so few words - well done. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Thank you SO MUCH!!! :) <3
Comment from Thomas Bowling
How true. It makes me wonder why young people are so attracted to Facebook and other social media. It's like they are trying to hurt themselves.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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How true. It makes me wonder why young people are so attracted to Facebook and other social media. It's like they are trying to hurt themselves.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Thank you SO MUCH!!! :) <3
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. Our words are more powerful than we can imagine. It can deep into the soul where no-one can see the scars, but it take a long time to heal.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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A very well-written 2-4-2 poem. Our words are more powerful than we can imagine. It can deep into the soul where no-one can see the scars, but it take a long time to heal.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Thank you SO MUCH!!! :) <3
Comment from The Death
So true! Words - good or bad - leave a deep impact on any individual. Words can be healing as well as hurting. All depends on how you intend to use those. Perhaps that's why they say "Think before you speak."
This looks like a stronger contender, as the content is easy to relate with. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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So true! Words - good or bad - leave a deep impact on any individual. Words can be healing as well as hurting. All depends on how you intend to use those. Perhaps that's why they say "Think before you speak."
This looks like a stronger contender, as the content is easy to relate with. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Thank you SO MUCH!!! :) <3
Comment from l.raven
HI Jill, such true words my sweet friend...words can hurt as bad a any beating....and they don't stop...you can forgive them...but they never go away...so very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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HI Jill, such true words my sweet friend...words can hurt as bad a any beating....and they don't stop...you can forgive them...but they never go away...so very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Thank you SO MUCH!!! :) <3
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you are sooooo welcome Jill...big smiles back at ya...love xxoo
Comment from mvbrooks
It's a challenge to write a full idea in only 8 syllables. You've created a brief poem that evokes deep, sad emotions and creates a clear, mental image--much like the one in the photo you chose. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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It's a challenge to write a full idea in only 8 syllables. You've created a brief poem that evokes deep, sad emotions and creates a clear, mental image--much like the one in the photo you chose. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Thank you SO MUCH!!! :) <3
Comment from marinadawn
This is so true , long after the words are forgotten by the speaker they can live on creating never healing wounds or those that close scars
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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This is so true , long after the words are forgotten by the speaker they can live on creating never healing wounds or those that close scars
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Thank you SO MUCH!!! :) <3
Comment from MelB
A wonderful 2-4-2 poem. Excellent syllable count. Yes, those words can hurt more than anything and they can never be taken back.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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A wonderful 2-4-2 poem. Excellent syllable count. Yes, those words can hurt more than anything and they can never be taken back.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2017
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Thank you SO MUCH!!! :) <3
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You're most welcome.
